by Morgan B Merriweather
Tuesday, February 14, 2012
Rated "PG" by the Author.
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let it shine
by my side
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kitten cuddly tenderness
or pale pink petals that open
and release a wisp of spring in the air
or a hint of a wish on a smile,
and one melting teardrop, of joy
or a hand that slightly brushes a cheek
lips plump and sweet
that linger for a moment,
just between mine
a necktie undone like a satin ribbon,
tissue - cotton shirttails unwrapped,
or fingers that slide
through silky long tresses,
faint feathery whisperings
cradled in the warmth of the moon, bathed in the stars
oh so gently, in my arms
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|Reviewed by Odin Roark
|Another piece of extraordinary depth. One is saddened in this day and age at the amount of mundane expressions of love, or the trash for art realm that seems to get more thickly layered each day. Your choice of layout style was also consistent with your obviously grown-up sense of respect as the single most important element of love. Well done.|
|Reviewed by JMS Bell
|A SYMPHONY...SO-O-O ENJOYED! THANKS FOR SHARING, MORGAN, I AM KEEPING THIS ONE. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH....
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|Adoring and adorable! Pink and perfect romantic softness and affection - the essence of Valentine. xx|
|Reviewed by neerja gandhi
|soo beautiful, tender and loving you and your Valentine...much enjoyed Morgan, happy thoughts.... :)neerja|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|So sweet, apt, and timely... ...thank you for sharing your gift, Morgan. Love and best wishes,
|Reviewed by jude forese
|A most beautful and eloquent poem ...|
|Reviewed by richard cederberg
|Lovely silky sentiments, MM, of two merging together slowly for steaming moments of somatic bliss. Wowzer formatting and font selection. Hope all is well! peace and continued inspiration ... r|
|Reviewed by Richard King
|Me likie.... Think the "word wrap" on some of the longer lines messed up the layout you had intended, but the message comes through. Dick|
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|Wonderful Valentine. Anyone would be pleased to get it.
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
|I love how you presented this poem, it flows just as smoothly reading it as it is visually...The last stanza did it for me,,,,,
You know how much I love the moon..lol Amazing poetry, glad you are back...have missed you much.
Peace, love and light,
|Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
|Oh! La La the romance *Morgan*
so very beautiful and fulfilling!!
|Reviewed by John Domino
|Very descriptive poetic song. To be continued?
|Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
|Lovely the gentle classic ambiance of romance. Beautifully penned
in your feather of pink quilled pen.
Lady Mary Ann
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
|This is exquisite. This, my friend is . . . a wonderful poem of desire and love and want and . . . what should be, but so many times isn't. I am impressed. You have been away for a few days, good to see you back, and with gusto.|