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| Reviewed by J Guenther |
11/3/2012 |
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| Promising. Nice consonantal balance in many places. A tiny bit of tightening might make it shine even more. "Deep depths" would be a very good place to start. Maybe rework the ending for more punch, too. Fine work. |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
3/29/2012 |
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A LOVELY SATCHEL...FILLED WITH THE SCENT OF BEAUTIFUL ROMANCE. DONE SO WELL. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS |
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| Reviewed by Amor Sabor |
3/28/2012 |
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You speak the language of love like water for chocolate...it is so smooth and easy on the tongue and satin upon the ears
Amor |
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| Reviewed by Vivian Dawson |
3/28/2012 |
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Sparkling effervesence of visions in
your poem *Morgan* expressive of the
wonderous sketch for making it real!!!!
Lady Vivian |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo |
3/28/2012 |
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| Sometimes, all we can do is hold on. Your opening lines are so strong in image and meaning, as is your entire poem. So moving! ~Elizabeth |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
3/27/2012 |
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| Flows like honey...gooey good! |
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| Reviewed by Jennifer Christian |
3/27/2012 |
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| Dreaming of sparkling kisses -- a nice thought. |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
3/27/2012 |
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Lay on the open page your hidden voice,
so that I may hold it in my hands,
Totally ADORE these lines especially, Morgan, as well as the swooning repetitions of words and lines with "hold on, hold on". So trance-like and evocative of intensity, along with your dreamy descriptions and lilting tone. Has all the warmth of a rapt reverie and desire for transportation. Just lovely! :)) xx |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
3/27/2012 |
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this is poetry of great tenderness
and depth.
Kudos, Morgan!
john |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
3/26/2012 |
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A heartthrobbing poem that oozes passion...
Eileen |
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| Reviewed by Christine Tsen |
3/26/2012 |
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Oh, I'm so there with every word of this dreamy poem!
What is going on with you girl? We have lost touch! Who is this mystery man of kisses?
Blessings,
Christine |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
3/26/2012 |
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| your wonderful poem definitely leaves an imprint on the imagination as well as the emotion ... |
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| Reviewed by Odin Roark |
3/26/2012 |
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| Enigmatic assurance that when all else fails, we still have our imagination as best friend, confidant, and most importantly, a writer's built-in shrink. |
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| Reviewed by neerja gandhi |
3/26/2012 |
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beautiful and very romantic :))
Good Wishes.neerja |
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| Reviewed by D. Vaineo |
3/26/2012 |
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Morgan, A very visual writing...
Always,
Deborah |
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| Reviewed by Richard King |
3/26/2012 |
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Your words magically paint colorful, sparkling images in my mind and I like it.
Thanks Dick |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
3/26/2012 |
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The power of the poem on the written page to inspire thoughts of love. Wonderful.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by pat medlin |
3/26/2012 |
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| ahhh these floating soothing words of love...this leaves me with a wistful smile...beautiful morgan |
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| Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger |
3/26/2012 |
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Lovely diamonds on the waters and sparkling kisses to romance
and dreamy. A fine pen you uniquely verse your words Morgan.
The artwork is beautiful.
Lady Mary Ann |
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| Reviewed by John Domino |
3/26/2012 |
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| Refreshingly romanantic! |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton |
3/26/2012 |
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| Nice thoughts, perfectly recorded in this poem. The words were unearthly, meant for a place in between the here and now and the place you desdcribed, and that place is the community of pure love. There is such a place, it is just very, very difficult to get there, and once you find it, even more difficult to maintain. Sorry. I was going on and on . . . Meant every word of it however. |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
3/25/2012 |
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I love how soft and sensual this poem is, the sketch is amazing.
Umm, you have been busy..
call me...
Peace, love and light,
Amber |
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