A Star Is Born
by karen l logan
Thursday, April 21, 2011
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Precious little moments
Impede our earthly body
Pulling,
Feeding,
Suckling the essence we share.
One blessed dew drop
To caress thy cheek
For that glorious day
Of unfolding.
One beam of light
Warming a droplet,
One moon beam
Brilliantly passes through
Each ventricle,
Each vein,
Time and again.
Passion, love, beauty,
All to behold
In the brilliant
Precious little moment
A star is born.
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| Reviewed by richard cederberg |
5/22/2011 |
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| This is a fine thought process inter-woven with lovely imaging. richard |
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| Reviewed by Kay P Devenish |
5/14/2011 |
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Oh,this is a sweet warm write,so glad am I that I stopped by to read it,feeling happy now.
Thanks Karen for this bright write.
Love from
kay |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
4/21/2011 |
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I very much like your way of seeing, Karen,
and how the poem takes me along.
John |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
4/21/2011 |
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Thank you for sharing these ethreal thoughts, Karen. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Richard King |
4/21/2011 |
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Karen, You lead, I'll follow. Not sure where we're heading, but I'm really beginning to enjoy the journey. I check in on your work every so often, but don’t always review it. I thought this was an especially nice one.
Thanks Dick |
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| Reviewed by Laura Fall |
4/21/2011 |
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Truly a Charming write indeed and words spoken so wonderfully great poem Karen
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