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... also for Joseph. Beethoven may have "played" some part in this. :0)
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And so we ensue -
in one surge, from one skin, in one refulgence;
With a sob, as if we were birthed
by a climax of the moon.
You hear us, I know, by the touch –
This inverted echo, poured from all that stillness unveils
when it ensues, later, from us…
- © Alexandra Oliveira (OneLight*®) – All rights reserved
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| Reviewed by A PAX |
10/28/2009 |
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| deep and intelligent thoughts..........soul mate creedo :) |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
7/5/2009 |
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| no doubt, the unity of two souls is worth endeavoring ,,, |
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| Reviewed by Dale Clark |
7/2/2009 |
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| Beautiful pen, great verse! |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
7/2/2009 |
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| BEAUTIFUL...YOUR PHRASES AND IMAGERY 'SINGS'. GOD BLESS AND THANKS FOR SHARING. JOYCE |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
7/1/2009 |
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Alexandra, You know that this poem just makes me love you two even more. You both are such beautiful people, and this poem surely cements that love that you share..I loved Joseph's comments to the poem, My heart if full with happiness to hear such love from you to your man.
Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V" |
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| Reviewed by L. Figgins |
7/1/2009 |
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"...With a sob as if we were birthed by a climax of the moon." Beautiful...
Lin |
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| Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® |
7/1/2009 |
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This is my fortune ...
to be blessed by a love so deep
"as if we were birthed
by a climax of the moon."
Grateful for this verse inspired by Beethoven.
Amo te muito,
Joseph |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
7/1/2009 |
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Very nicely served up on a bed of wonderful.
Fee |
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| Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle |
7/1/2009 |
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Nice poem,take care
EDWIN |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
7/1/2009 |
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| May you both continue to ensue. |
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