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Validity of Driving Forces
by Vivian L Dawson

Tuesday, January 31, 2012
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Driving life's skills of twist and turns leaving
confinement of circles with which to navigate
a cozy cove in forward or reverse in lieu of

Learning every U you make will only find you
at an unclosed end forever looped in a roller
coaster ride of ups and downs with no closure

Right on red after brief stops only to
turn forever looking both ways but not
to live dangerously left turning on yellow
instead of waiting for the changing to
the green lending to the safety of a
straightaway all paved ahead...be not
color blind approaching an intersection

Avoid the narrow and set your course to
widen horizons steering the causeways
only to avoid a straight line passing by
the driving forces observing the rules
whereby sign post along your path dictate
oncoming speed of traffic ahead to heed
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Oliver's law of location:
No matter where you go, there you are.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

May life be your license always renewed to
traverse the roads by your hands constantly
in control of the wheel maneuvering such a
wondrous adventure that so emulates power
in virtual validation from such driving allied
forces being in alignment with your happiness

(c) Validity of Driving Forces
31January2012
Vivian L Dawson

 


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Reviewed by Christine Tsen 2/2/2012
A wondrous adventure is your poem, as it maps such thought-provoking wisdom!
Whenever I am on a bad stretch of life's journey, I am always so grateful for companions, and on the good stretches too...
Blessings,
Christine
Reviewed by Patrick Granfors 2/1/2012
Of course everybody has their own unique sense of living dangerously and in reality, everybody needs a little adventure beyond the comfort zone. I let the Burma Shave signs guide me. Patrick
Reviewed by Rory Dall (Reader) 2/1/2012
If only we had the courage to avoid the narrow path and drive towards the wide horizons, if only we could be constantly in control of our life's wheel. Fine, original thinking at work here.
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 2/1/2012
maneuvering such a wondrous adventure

Drive On!
Reviewed by Amber Moonstone 1/31/2012
One can never get away from oneself. It's the driven probability and that fact will never change, but direction can always be altered.

Nicely done!
Peace, love and light,
Amber
Reviewed by Roger Wayne Eberle 1/31/2012
there is a bent in this road trip that feels driven, and I know you mean well by steering this course, but drive will only take you so far, and when the road ends, the adventure of a pathless would embodies yet unimagined vistas beyond the rivers of dreams I have got to find far from R.E.M. sleep on automatic for the people pilot... I'll meet you there, dearest Vivian... don't forget to validate your parking.

Roger
Reviewed by jude forese 1/31/2012
the driver forces of your poem are aligned in the right direction ....
Reviewed by Laura Fall 1/31/2012
Amazingly written poetry as always my friend Laura
Reviewed by Christine Alwin 1/31/2012
We steer our live's, hopefully in a good direction, with a fun ride :)
Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger 1/31/2012
Lady Vivian ~ no matter where you go, there you are
to navigate in alignment with your happiness
splendid write ~ Lady Mary Ann
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton 1/31/2012
Ah, you speak of driving freeways and narrow roads, as if we are settled behind the car of choice, but I realize, as will everyone, in fact you pointed it out in the first verse, that the driving herein is concerned with the driving of life's choices. Well conceived and written
Reviewed by william goldman (Reader) 1/31/2012
your vocabularyand your ability to write never ceases to amaze. hg
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