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| Reviewed by Christine Tsen |
2/2/2012 |
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A wondrous adventure is your poem, as it maps such thought-provoking wisdom!
Whenever I am on a bad stretch of life's journey, I am always so grateful for companions, and on the good stretches too...
Blessings,
Christine |
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| Reviewed by Patrick Granfors |
2/1/2012 |
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| Of course everybody has their own unique sense of living dangerously and in reality, everybody needs a little adventure beyond the comfort zone. I let the Burma Shave signs guide me. Patrick |
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| Reviewed by Rory Dall (Reader) |
2/1/2012 |
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| If only we had the courage to avoid the narrow path and drive towards the wide horizons, if only we could be constantly in control of our life's wheel. Fine, original thinking at work here. |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
2/1/2012 |
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maneuvering such a wondrous adventure
Drive On! |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
1/31/2012 |
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One can never get away from oneself. It's the driven probability and that fact will never change, but direction can always be altered.
Nicely done!
Peace, love and light,
Amber |
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| Reviewed by Roger Wayne Eberle |
1/31/2012 |
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there is a bent in this road trip that feels driven, and I know you mean well by steering this course, but drive will only take you so far, and when the road ends, the adventure of a pathless would embodies yet unimagined vistas beyond the rivers of dreams I have got to find far from R.E.M. sleep on automatic for the people pilot... I'll meet you there, dearest Vivian... don't forget to validate your parking.
Roger |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
1/31/2012 |
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| the driver forces of your poem are aligned in the right direction .... |
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| Reviewed by Laura Fall |
1/31/2012 |
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Amazingly written poetry as always my friend Laura
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
1/31/2012 |
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| We steer our live's, hopefully in a good direction, with a fun ride :) |
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| Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger |
1/31/2012 |
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Lady Vivian ~ no matter where you go, there you are
to navigate in alignment with your happiness
splendid write ~ Lady Mary Ann |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton |
1/31/2012 |
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| Ah, you speak of driving freeways and narrow roads, as if we are settled behind the car of choice, but I realize, as will everyone, in fact you pointed it out in the first verse, that the driving herein is concerned with the driving of life's choices. Well conceived and written |
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| Reviewed by william goldman (Reader) |
1/31/2012 |
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| your vocabularyand your ability to write never ceases to amaze. hg |
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