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| Reviewed by Roger Wayne Eberle |
2/9/2012 |
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a becoming awakening... a she'll be coming away kenning... tender and poignant in effortless verse... you make it look easy... we all know it is far from that...
Be well and at peace with all...
Roger |
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| Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather |
2/9/2012 |
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| so light and airy...yet murky water thoughts. This is thought provoking. ~ Morgan |
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| Reviewed by william goldman (Reader) |
2/8/2012 |
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| very good poetry VIV,-------------------HG |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
2/8/2012 |
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Ascertain value by nude
your beauty in restful state
with embodiment of mind so
attentive to augment desires
Love these verses and the whole offering, Vivian. Thank you. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
2/8/2012 |
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The purity of nakedness revealed.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger |
2/8/2012 |
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Beautiful poetry ~ Lady Vivian
Lady Mary Ann |
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| Reviewed by Rory Dall (Reader) |
2/8/2012 |
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| I suppose dreams would be boring if they were always happy and danger free but wouldn't it be nice to be able, always, to do that half awake thing where we can steer our half finished dreams away from self destruction. |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
2/8/2012 |
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| the art of Becoming is surrounded by dreams effortlessly flowing as your inspired poem articulates ... |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
2/8/2012 |
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| Dreams can be wondrous. |
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| Reviewed by Patrick Granfors |
2/7/2012 |
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| I don't wear pajamas either;-) Patrick |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
2/7/2012 |
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| Your poem is a perfect night cap for me as I close my day with this and off to dream...truly a beauty! |
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| Reviewed by Laura Fall |
2/7/2012 |
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Truly Fascinating poetry Laura
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton |
2/7/2012 |
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| You lead us into many different stages within this one, Vivian, but in the end you were very positive with, "awaken to Become." |
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