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| Reviewed by Patrick Granfors |
4/18/2012 |
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| There must be fifty ways to leave your lover.......or nemesis. I think your bottle came back to you. Patrick |
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| Reviewed by Cindy Schaffer (Reader) |
4/18/2012 |
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Beautifully Written, As You Always Do. Love, Peace, Joy, Happiness, Lots Of Laughter, And Most Of All, ~ God's Blessings, To Shower You And ALL Your Family,
Today And Everyday, ~~~~~
Cindy E. H. Schaffer :) |
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| Reviewed by Christine Tsen |
4/10/2012 |
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So freeing and beautifully written!
Onward, away with darkness. I identify with and admire this poem!
Blessings,
Christine |
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| Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger |
4/9/2012 |
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Garlands of heart imagine the dolphins at play.
A wonderful poem Lady Vivian.
Lady Mary Ann |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
4/9/2012 |
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| Casting away our anguish - sounds marvelous. |
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| Reviewed by Amor Sabor |
4/8/2012 |
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| Always a dream-like situation to be the receiver of such a message and respond in kind. Beautiful sentiments expressed. |
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| Reviewed by Rory Dall (Reader) |
4/8/2012 |
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| If only it were that easy to cast away our troubles. I'm sure most folks like the idea of a message in a bottle, the infinite possibilities that come with the act offset by the remote chance that anyone will find the message. You have handled this theme really well, it makes a good read. |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
4/8/2012 |
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I have received your message from the bottle cast in a far-off shore and read it. Now, I have a clear understanding of you.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
4/7/2012 |
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A fine "message" well-shared, Vivian; also I love the imagery as well as the lovely image that you have chosen to represent your theme. Thank you. Love and best wishes,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
4/7/2012 |
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the poet with wings
yearning imagining moving beyond
earth boundaries
we all have to sail somewhere to
be us
an excellent poem, Vivian
john |
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| Reviewed by Budd Nelson |
4/7/2012 |
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Vivian,
A wonderful piece.
Budd |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
4/7/2012 |
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Leave the wine as well in the bottle, as it will make the easiness of this poem go down smoother...
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| Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather |
4/7/2012 |
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| I think i would like to stuff a few messages in a bottle...easier than a ship.....but, your poems message is far more interesting. enjoyed! |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
4/7/2012 |
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| 'Message for a Bottle' Just stuffing it in there is a good relief at times to take off some weight of the mind..this is deep and emotional. I can see those dolphins playing~ |
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| Reviewed by Laura Fall |
4/7/2012 |
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An excellent poem so heartfelt and meaningful (Have A Happy Easter) Laura
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
4/7/2012 |
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| a message in a bottle one would hope to stumble upon and be inspired by ... |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton |
4/7/2012 |
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| Love this self-introspection, whether for real or made up make not one whit of difference, Vivian. It is the grit within the lines that lend hope and eventual salvation to this lonely person. You struck a good chord with me here. |
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