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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
4/14/2012 |
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Many seem to have this need to start their lives over again.
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| Reviewed by Rory Dall (Reader) |
4/14/2012 |
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| This has the air of all those stories we read as kids but with a modern twist. No wicked witch this time, just a king with a wandering eye. Of course it ends well and we all like a happy ending, don't we. |
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| Reviewed by Roger Wayne Eberle |
4/13/2012 |
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| ...a vista's visage...more than mere mirage...a virtual haven of haloed heaven...haunted only by the vestige of one whose pale virtues daunt and disappoint... but your poem does not... rare and radiant imagery fringes these finessed lines and puts more than a varnish of value to the sentiments... giving them a sentience all their own... a life sentience that can never end... rare and radiant... |
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| Reviewed by Janna Hill |
4/12/2012 |
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I find myself damning the king and asking why, why of the princess and queen. I shall find contentment with the hopeful ending.
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
4/12/2012 |
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| Seeds left to bring life should never be a crime...I was engulfed in this passionate story...wanting more...it can't end! |
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| Reviewed by Patrick Granfors |
4/12/2012 |
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| The Queen's gain is the King's loss begun years ago. In the end, his aromatic grove has produced him nothing but bitter fruit. Patrick |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
4/12/2012 |
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| The Circle of Life, begins again and again. |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton |
4/12/2012 |
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| I'm with Jude. A never-ending circle. You poetry has enough visuals in them for forty poems to be made from them. Excellent. |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
4/11/2012 |
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| strangely enough, your poem ended as it began ... picture perfect .... |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
4/11/2012 |
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i like this allegory, Vivian, colourful
and dynamic and with bite
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| Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger |
4/11/2012 |
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Rich in visuals of emotions and strength to begin again and again.
Beautifully penned Lady Vivian. ~ Lady Mary Ann |
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| Reviewed by Laura Fall |
4/11/2012 |
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A fascinating poem well done indeed Laura
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