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| Reviewed by Rafika Anderson |
5/27/2012 |
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| Good job! Poignant phrasing and clear message of true affection. |
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| Reviewed by neerja gandhi |
4/21/2012 |
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| beautifulll....loved it.. best wishes Vivian, neerja :) |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
4/21/2012 |
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| Stunning...flourishing poem Vivian~ |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
4/21/2012 |
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| Lovely Poem! |
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| Reviewed by Diana Wiles |
4/21/2012 |
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Such passionate words written so elegantly,
A true work of art..
Diana... |
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| Reviewed by Rory Dall (Reader) |
4/20/2012 |
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| There is a bitter sweet air to this poem. The title suggests anticipated pleasure but the thorns speak of loss. This is good work. |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
4/20/2012 |
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| a vase of beautiful poetic flowering ... |
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| Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger |
4/20/2012 |
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Loveliest of essence Lady Vivian.
Lady Mary Ann |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
4/20/2012 |
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this is perfect, Vivian,
simply perfect
john |
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| Reviewed by Amor Sabor |
4/19/2012 |
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| Such beautiful lines extend beyond the contours of her romantic and sensuous form |
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| Reviewed by Laura Fall |
4/19/2012 |
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This truly is such a beautiful write well done so amazingly Laura
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| Reviewed by Patrick Granfors |
4/19/2012 |
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| A vase...a love vessel.....that's it! You've become a love machine!!!!Patrick |
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| Reviewed by Janna Hill |
4/19/2012 |
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my body a vase
heart above the thorns
I love these lines.
:) Janna |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton |
4/19/2012 |
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"Muse of continuum / without end"
Ah yes indeed, Vivian. You have placed heart above the thorns in such a wonderful and loving love poem. Beautifully, heartfelt, done. |
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