|Reviewed by Rafika Anderson
|Good job! Poignant phrasing and clear message of true affection.|
|Reviewed by neerja gandhi
|beautifulll....loved it.. best wishes Vivian, neerja :)|
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|Stunning...flourishing poem Vivian~|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Reviewed by Diana Wiles
|Such passionate words written so elegantly,
A true work of art..
|Reviewed by Rory Dall (Reader)
|There is a bitter sweet air to this poem. The title suggests anticipated pleasure but the thorns speak of loss. This is good work.|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|a vase of beautiful poetic flowering ...|
|Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
|Loveliest of essence Lady Vivian.
Lady Mary Ann
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|this is perfect, Vivian,
|Reviewed by Amor Sabor
|Such beautiful lines extend beyond the contours of her romantic and sensuous form|
|Reviewed by Laura Fall
|This truly is such a beautiful write well done so amazingly Laura
|Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
|A vase...a love vessel.....that's it! You've become a love machine!!!!Patrick|
|Reviewed by Janna Hill
|my body a vase
heart above the thorns
I love these lines.
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
|"Muse of continuum / without end"
Ah yes indeed, Vivian. You have placed heart above the thorns in such a wonderful and loving love poem. Beautifully, heartfelt, done.