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Itsy Bitsy Spider by Vivian L Dawson Friday, May 11, 2012 Rated "PG" by the Author. Share Print Save Become a Fan

Life's roads too many legs beckon proceed at your own risk engaging unforgiving love making for black widows short lived the ecstasy poisoning her beauty suspended in emotional bliss within entangled vile web cunning with her deceptive laughter Solid the white line not the one with spaces where a black widow may dwell spinning her web of silk deceit for your soul to take Ever will be black and white manifestations hint of red taking on meaning warning to stop literally for your life's culmination to fruition by endurance to make it "The itsy bitsy spider crawled up the water spout. Down came the rain, and washed the spider out. Out came the sun, and dried up all the rain, and the itsy bitsy spider went up the spout again." Beware webs of lust siphoning away desires as too lovely the widow will make of your black (c) Itsy Bitsy Spider 10May2010 Vivian L Dawson

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Reviewed by Patrick Granfors	5/19/2012

A good reason to avoid hourglass figures. Patrick




Reviewed by Christine Tsen	5/13/2012

What a creative spirit you have! Fabulous blending of two worlds!




Reviewed by Ronald Hull	5/12/2012

I love that little spider nursery rhyme. Makes for some great hip-hop too. I never knew a black widow I didn't like. But then I never knew a black widow, thank goodness. Ron




Reviewed by jude forese	5/12/2012

the spiderette will always prevail ... well penned, Vivian ,,




Reviewed by Janna Hill	5/11/2012

Well expressed Vivian. A spider's simplicity and our complexity are not so different.




Reviewed by Christine Alwin	5/11/2012

Unique in expression, captivating poem you have woven..the ending ties it all together~ Christine




Reviewed by John Flanagan	5/11/2012

i love the blend of the serious and the childlike, very effective writing, Vivian, and impactful... and as ever with you, genuinely worthwhile john




Reviewed by Budd Nelson	5/11/2012

Vivian, No male of any species is ever in control, nor does he understand trully. excellent rendition. Budd




Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger	5/11/2012

Cunning and intrigue in this web of verse. Excellent perceptive write Lady Vivian. Lady Mary Ann




Reviewed by Laura Fall	5/11/2012

Truly a fascinating and very interesting write well done indeed Laura




Reviewed by Rory Dall (Reader)	5/11/2012

I sure hope it was worth it for all those little male spiders that got eaten afterwards. Just goes to show how weak men are; note to self; beware of predatory females. Are you mocking our folly, Poetess?




Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart	5/11/2012

A warning well penned Vivian.




Reviewed by Felix Perry	5/11/2012

Intense..... fee




Reviewed by Jerry Bolton	5/11/2012

You called this one right, Vivian. Black Widows are a cruel and venomous creature, with the allure to beckon unwary males into her web of deceitful intrigue.