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Liquid Gold for Desires
by Vivian L Dawson

Thursday, June 07, 2012
Rated "PG" by the Author.
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Rain, rain, rain wetting our
sexual intentions tracing
our bodies like fingers in
the sweet summer liquidity
with plummets of thunder
engaging our every move

Complimenting fire of
desires lightening has
already ignited eminent
in steamed heat rising
of our emotional intimate
intense pursuit of passion
satisfying our every need

Let it rain...May it pour
a storm for many to have
such exhilarating desires
carried out in the flesh

(c) Liquid Gold for Desires
06June2012
Vivian L Dawson

 


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Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger 6/10/2012
Sweet summer liquid gold for desires sensous and exhilaratng.
Lady Vivian your verses pulsate ravishingly in thunderstorms of passion.

Lady Mary Ann
Reviewed by Roger Wayne Eberle 6/10/2012
...exhilarating as the long, hard reign of sensuality may be, dear Vivian, your poem goes the distance when it comes to revivifying the passions that come when a downpour really pours it on! Way to drench us and stir us with your steamy deluge.
Reviewed by Darrell and Kathy Adams 6/9/2012
I have visions of steam rising and evaporating into the storm..of rain or emotion? Excellent, good tone and movement, strength of passion. Be well, Kathy
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 6/8/2012
Thank you for sharing this sensual offering that awakens thought and emotion, Vivian. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis
Reviewed by Rory Dall (Reader) 6/8/2012
This is cleverly composed, there is a breathless pace and an air of abandon about the poem that compliments the steamy intensity of the subject.
Reviewed by John Flanagan 6/8/2012
tremendous fluency in this work, Vivian,
words ideas and images are continuous and unbroken
throughout..matching the energy of the theme

john
Reviewed by Amber Moonstone 6/8/2012
I just love the way you wrote this poem. So full of senuousness and tasteful love.

Nicely done!

Peace, love and light,
Amber
Reviewed by jude forese 6/7/2012
drops of sensuous gold are precious ...
Reviewed by Christine Alwin 6/7/2012
Amazingly moving poetry, this is as good as it gets...let it rain!
Reviewed by Budd Nelson 6/7/2012
Vivian,
Is it hot in here or what...hooo rah
Budd
Reviewed by Laura Fall 6/7/2012
Absolutely Excellent poetry and the photo truly Breathtaking Laura
Reviewed by Felix Perry 6/7/2012
The picture combined with your sensual word painting would make aAnyone want to experience making love in a summer rainstorm...wonderful poetry indeed.
fee
Reviewed by Patrick Granfors 6/7/2012
Wow. I'm having lunch here at work. Good thing I'm wearing a raincoat! Patrick
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton 6/7/2012
You are becoming exceptional in the art of giving us the fires of sexuality these days, Vivian. The photo is perfect for the verse and the verse is mesmerizing and sizzling. You don't leave us much for our imagination. Good writing, my friend.
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