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| Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger |
6/10/2012 |
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Sweet summer liquid gold for desires sensous and exhilaratng.
Lady Vivian your verses pulsate ravishingly in thunderstorms of passion.
Lady Mary Ann |
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| Reviewed by Roger Wayne Eberle |
6/10/2012 |
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| ...exhilarating as the long, hard reign of sensuality may be, dear Vivian, your poem goes the distance when it comes to revivifying the passions that come when a downpour really pours it on! Way to drench us and stir us with your steamy deluge. |
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| Reviewed by Darrell and Kathy Adams |
6/9/2012 |
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| I have visions of steam rising and evaporating into the storm..of rain or emotion? Excellent, good tone and movement, strength of passion. Be well, Kathy |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
6/8/2012 |
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Thank you for sharing this sensual offering that awakens thought and emotion, Vivian. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Rory Dall (Reader) |
6/8/2012 |
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| This is cleverly composed, there is a breathless pace and an air of abandon about the poem that compliments the steamy intensity of the subject. |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
6/8/2012 |
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tremendous fluency in this work, Vivian,
words ideas and images are continuous and unbroken
throughout..matching the energy of the theme
john |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
6/8/2012 |
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I just love the way you wrote this poem. So full of senuousness and tasteful love.
Nicely done!
Peace, love and light,
Amber |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
6/7/2012 |
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| drops of sensuous gold are precious ... |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
6/7/2012 |
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| Amazingly moving poetry, this is as good as it gets...let it rain! |
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| Reviewed by Budd Nelson |
6/7/2012 |
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Vivian,
Is it hot in here or what...hooo rah
Budd |
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| Reviewed by Laura Fall |
6/7/2012 |
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Absolutely Excellent poetry and the photo truly Breathtaking Laura
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
6/7/2012 |
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The picture combined with your sensual word painting would make aAnyone want to experience making love in a summer rainstorm...wonderful poetry indeed.
fee |
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| Reviewed by Patrick Granfors |
6/7/2012 |
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| Wow. I'm having lunch here at work. Good thing I'm wearing a raincoat! Patrick |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton |
6/7/2012 |
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| You are becoming exceptional in the art of giving us the fires of sexuality these days, Vivian. The photo is perfect for the verse and the verse is mesmerizing and sizzling. You don't leave us much for our imagination. Good writing, my friend. |
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