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| Reviewed by Nura Ahmad (Reader) |
3/18/2004 |
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The poem is highly emotional. It shows an intense feeling of love and the enxiety involve, in the walting? There is the uncertainty as in- you could be my true love/my dreams/my death. But there may certainty as well. This shows in- only I know/ which one I write about. It also encompasses in it the hope to embrace the loved one or indeed the loved thing - the desire of her heart.
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| Reviewed by Jerry Robards |
12/30/2002 |
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| Welcome back....Good write |
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| Reviewed by Ian Thorpe |
11/30/2002 |
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loved this poem, it is deeply introspective and yet reflects thoughts familiar to most of us.
"dahlinks???" that is simply sooo Zsa Zsa Gabor dahling. When Janet comes over I'll teach her to do that "clipped" English upper class accent and she can pass it on, but for now try this. "Dahling I lohve yoh!"
Absolutlah simple isn't it, yah? No? - oh well. |
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| Reviewed by Masarat Daud (Reader) |
8/9/2002 |
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| Heyyyyyyyyyyyyy!! Great to see you here *dahlink* lol :) This was a beautiful write...hope something rings soon! ;) |
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| Reviewed by Amor Sabor |
8/9/2002 |
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Welcome back...beautiful work
Masterfully done...even if it is in code :)
Amor |
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| Reviewed by Trixie Love |
8/9/2002 |
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Well Hi Caryn,
I decided to pop in
for a visit...
I am glad that things
are going so well for you...
I read your sweet comment on mine...:)
I just felt like it's time to move on....
I will stop in from time to time to say hi to my
buddies... :)
Love and hugs
Trixie |
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| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
8/9/2002 |
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Hi Caryn:
Sop glad to have you back!!!!! Great poem! Yes, we poets are very expressive. I'd rather read an expressive poet than to read forced form of structure without feelings.
Sandie Angel :o) / May Lu $*_*$ |
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| Reviewed by Janet Caldwell (author) |
8/8/2002 |
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| I know how you feel sweets! I hope that you got my reply to your email. I think that my message board is goofy tonight. hee hee. E-me at jlyjan.aol.com BTW, the answer is yes, you will get a plug in the newsletter. Also, glad you gave us a great new photo. I still have the same ole one. lol Listen for me on the radio. Love you, JC xoxoxo |
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| Reviewed by Sailor Neptune |
8/8/2002 |
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| Wonderful..I hope he knows.... |
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| Reviewed by Theresa Koch |
8/8/2002 |
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| Your heart sings in your words~So glad your back even if only for the moment! |
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| Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson |
8/8/2002 |
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Glad you popped in, I knew you were busy. Do you always wait looking that way in the picture? WoW!
Great poem!
Pop in more often? Ron |
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