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"Turmoil means existance. If true turmoil is not there, false turmoil created by humans tries to replace it...And only Atrocity can show the true meaning of Fear and the pulse that is Existance." - Misali-aka-Besu
This is to one of my favorite characters, Gina, who had as a spiritual companion a dead priest by the name of Atrocit. Enjoy, and be sunk.
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The ghost is gone
But the Hallow returned
A new hell to take place
Where my companion once was
I am empty...Atrocit is gone
The ignorant fools think their problems are more needy
of the attentions their fake peers give them
just to shut them up
like the spirit never did
I am empty...Atrocit is gone
He was many things besides bound to me
A nuisance, a bother, a protector, a parent
A friend, I can't say much more, for now
I am empty...Atrocit is gone
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| Reviewed by Bill Grimes Jr. |
2/27/2007 |
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"The ignorant fools think their problems are more needy
of the attentions their fake peers give them
just to shut them up
like the spirit never did
I am empty...Atrocit is gone"
Excellent work Elizabeth!
Bill |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) |
2/22/2006 |
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VEry good verse.
Enjoyed. |
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