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If time was a grain of sand
I'd remove the peice that caused your birth
For you are mine
Your life and memories are no longer shared
By anyone else
For love I would kidnap you as an infant
Take care of you
Protect and love you
Keep you for an existance or two, not
By anyone else
I am eternal but love seldom
You are fleeting yet you lust so much
True hell is what I know
Lacking what others gain
By anyone else
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| Reviewed by Masood Lohar |
1/25/2008 |
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"If time was a grain of sand
I'd remove the peice that caused your birth "
There is this anger, protest and there is that "defiance", in your poems, which we have received from the first humans. there is that longing for that "original sin". your poems are very powerful and i like that anger which vibrates your words.
warm regards
Masood |
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| Reviewed by Peter Paton |
2/22/2006 |
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A beautiful and poignant write Beth !
Good to see you posting again
Peter |
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