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Qianbanlian
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Handsum Hart
Sunday, June 24, 2007
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Nelumbo 'Qianbanlian'
"Thousand Petals"
Photo by Eiji Nitasaka
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Qianbanlian
By Handsum-Hart
As I sat inside
The snow-covered library
At the University of Switzerland,
Looking through the archives
Of the National Geographic News,
I came across a flower
Called a Qianbanlian;
That has 4,000 petals
And with me
Being the romantic that I am,
I said to myself
"I shall make mind-pleasing love
Unto my lady on our wedding day
Using this flower"
For on our honeymoon night
I shall place it betwixt her bosom
Then pluck its petals, one by one
And with each plucked petal
I shall tell her, in tender voice
Why I love her
And after I have told her
In 4,000 beautiful ways
Why I love her,
I shall lie her upon
These love-stained petals
And make heart-pleasing,
Husband-to-Wife love unto her,
As I whisper into
The ears of her soul
"Beautiful lady, forever will you be
My 4,000 Petaled Lover"
© 6-01-2007
Ronald Howard Moman
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| Reviewed by SOULFUL SHEE G. Pulsing In Passionate Purple PassionS |
7/31/2007 |
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Ahhhh, do it quick before they turn brown!
What romantic poetry handsum,
I too write flower poetry is a erotic/love form
nice to know someone feels it so!
Warm hugs, Warrior Purple Lady Sheeeoox
STay Positive!
STay SAFE! |
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| Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green |
7/28/2007 |
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Should be Handsum-HEART!! SO romantic and sweet and imaginative. Takes my breath away!!! Somebody is going to be counting herself
very, very lucky. . .and you are going to get very, very, very lucky, lol. You have done a wonderful job of expanding on an inspired
idea. B r a v o !! 'Pea' <3 -- PS: What would we do without National Geographic? Talk about a treasure trove! |
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| Reviewed by Barbara Terry |
7/20/2007 |
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Very romantic, senusal, and passionate, Ron. How do I love thee? Let me count the ways. 4,000 of them to be exact. This is a very beautiful picture of sensual romance, and soft erotic passion for the woman you love. Thank you for sharing.
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peaceon earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), sister Barbie |
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| Reviewed by Cynth'ya Reed |
7/12/2007 |
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4,000 petals? Hmmm. . .He loves me he loves me not would be quite frustrating. . . flip a coin! (smile). This is nice, VERY nice.
blessin's
cynth'ya |
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| Reviewed by Tiana Jett (Reader) |
7/4/2007 |
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| I agree with Eileen, Ron, you are unique and your poetry just oozes with passion and romance ... Have a safe and Happy 4th ... hugs |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
6/25/2007 |
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HH ,You are the king of unique romantic poems! I've never seen such a flower, it is so beautiful and matches your poem to perfection!
Love,
Eileen |
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| Reviewed by twinklewrites at her desk |
6/24/2007 |
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| Very romanic Ronald, enjoyed reading...Peggy |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
6/24/2007 |
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Awwwwwww this is awesome.....will you marry me......lol!!
Love Tink-Tinka |
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| Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone |
6/24/2007 |
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| Very well done though you might want to practise the plucking to get the best time in...lol...beautiful words though with all seriousness. A romantic for sure. Good to see a post from you. Lady J |
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace |
6/24/2007 |
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| Very nice writing..Hugss |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
6/24/2007 |
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| You are not called the King of Romance for nothing. This is one of your best. |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
6/24/2007 |
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Nature is wonderful. I'm afraid that I'd give in to my lust long before 4,000 words, if I could remember that many.
Metaphor for many, and.... patience.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
6/24/2007 |
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Symbolic and as usual, very romantic. Thanks for sharing, Ron. Blessings to you,
Regis |
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