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| Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz |
1/19/2004 |
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I am one with Vanessa, in that you had better
be careful that you don't get what you wish for!
Ha! A "romantic" you are? Yes...in capital letters. |
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| Reviewed by J. Hart (Reader) |
10/16/2003 |
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| Handsum ~ Exquisite!! Very sweet and easy to read ~ and to feel. Thank you. ~ Julia Hart |
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| Reviewed by R.D. Pounds |
7/17/2003 |
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Wow, HH, this - filled with imagination transformed into molten verbal gold - reminds me of the love poems written a few centuries ago! I'd like to challenge you: please write about what you would be to her. :)
Gina |
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| Reviewed by Jackie Brooks |
7/17/2003 |
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| This is beautiful poetry, Jim (my husband) thinks so too. He is a romantic like you. |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
7/9/2003 |
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| Very nicely done!! |
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| Reviewed by Woman Words (Reader) |
7/9/2003 |
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| Liltingly lovely.... |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
7/5/2003 |
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| This is absolutely beautiful! and very romantic. |
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| Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader) |
7/5/2003 |
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Tactfully sensual! This is beautiful. Unborn kisses.....LOVED THAT! Enjoyed the wole thing. Was easy to read as well. It flows nice. Having all of these things would be priceless!
Thanks,
Emilie |
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| Reviewed by Vesna TwinFlameunion |
7/3/2003 |
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Yes..she will be ALL that and more..just send out the clarion call...no, I'm NOT kidding...write all that and send it out into the cosmos..aaaaaaaaaand..before ya know it she'll manifest...hmmm..I wonder what you'll do then...LOL perhaps RUN... for you may just GET what you asked for...don't let that minor point deter you though...
Good luck !
Vesna |
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| Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader) |
7/3/2003 |
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| Quite lovely.....ty, Dani |
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| Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan |
7/1/2003 |
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This is pure magic..lovely write..
Jenni |
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| Reviewed by Sara Coslett |
7/1/2003 |
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This is quite beautiful. What ever she will be to you just make sure you let her know always, always, always...that she is loved.
~Sara |
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| Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
7/1/2003 |
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This was beautiful and just outstanding, excellent, poetry at its best!
Reindeer |
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| Reviewed by Trixie Love |
6/29/2003 |
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One word describes this one...
"AWESOME"
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Trixie :)
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| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
6/29/2003 |
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There is so much beauty in this write. This is totally awesome!
May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o) |
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| Reviewed by Donna Maris |
6/29/2003 |
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I had so many favorite stanzas here - you touched so many parts that I like to think about.. my favorite:
Will your beauty
be my island of enchantment
secluded amidst the clouds
overflowing with trees
brimming with golden delicious apples
filling me with the sweet taste
I LOVE apples..=) but also the metaphor-
but anytime you want to shake my tree.. =)
Donna
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| Reviewed by Kay P Devenish |
6/27/2003 |
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| An excellent poem! |
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| Reviewed by Marilyn Seray |
6/26/2003 |
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| This entire poem flows like the calmest seas...so very soft and romantic. |
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| Reviewed by serenety L |
6/25/2003 |
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Well, I guess she'll be a little bit of everything - just enough to make you happy.
Great write
S |
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| Reviewed by E. Richardson |
6/25/2003 |
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| This is so good! Excellent job here! |
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| Reviewed by na na (Reader) |
6/25/2003 |
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| This is a beautiful poem. bill |
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| Reviewed by Linda Hill |
6/24/2003 |
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Spoken from a true romantic
heart..:)
This is one of the best romantic
poems I have ever read. I will
be reading more of you!
A delicious write..
~~Linda~~ |
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| Reviewed by Kerry Compton Star Girl |
6/24/2003 |
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| I agree with Jessica, that particular stanza is pure gold. ~Kerry |
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| Reviewed by Dove (Reader) |
6/23/2003 |
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OOOO..LA..LA...This is very quite lovely, Mr. hansome heart..!!!!!!!
Peace and light,
Dove |
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| Reviewed by Lady Peg |
6/23/2003 |
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oops did it again, Sorry I seen Lady A above and then clicked this is as I said excellent poetry.
Lady Peg |
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| Reviewed by Debra Wakefield (Reader) |
6/23/2003 |
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I agree with Jessica, that is my favorite part also. Very nicely done..look forward to more...
Deb |
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| Reviewed by Marie Wadsworth |
6/23/2003 |
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| Prayful ballet. Inspirational and romantic verses -- very nice. |
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| Reviewed by Debra Stiles, The Original Mister |
6/23/2003 |
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Very beautiful..The Lord speaks to us through many things,,,,and this I needed
to read
Thanks
Mister |
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| Reviewed by Tony Nerone |
6/23/2003 |
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Good Job!!
tn |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
6/23/2003 |
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| intriguing and thought provoking write! (((HUGS))) and love, a new friend in texas, karen lynn. :) |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) |
6/23/2003 |
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| This is lovely, thought provoking and romantic. |
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| Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers |
6/23/2003 |
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| What a lovely write! Makes one think. ~SH~ |
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| Reviewed by Jessica Stanfield |
6/23/2003 |
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Will your unborn kisses
be earthshaking moments
of loving passion
birthed on my lips
lived in my heart
retired in my dreams
and buried
still breathing in my soul
This my favorite part, but the whole thing is beautiful! Very good write! Thanks for sharing it with me.
- J - |
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