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| Reviewed by Gwendolyn Thomas Gath |
10/19/2003 |
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| Wonderfully, delightful~I enjoyed the way you plotted out this poem~great planning....just the way one should~thanks for sharing, Ronald!! |
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| Reviewed by Ashraf Goreja |
9/15/2003 |
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Most beautiful and powerful poem. I love it.
Greetings.
Goreja.com |
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| Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
9/14/2003 |
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This was so lovely, A beautiful poem to read this evening!
Reindeer |
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| Reviewed by Julie Donner Andersen |
8/16/2003 |
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Another gorgeous piece of work, Handsum!
I loved this line best:
"Will my heart be the only house
your love calls home..."
Simple, but beautifully to the point.
~Julie :) |
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| Reviewed by na na (Reader) |
8/10/2003 |
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| Hi Ron, a beautifully delicate write. |
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| Reviewed by serenety L |
8/2/2003 |
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Ronald, I feel you will be a little bit of everything to her.
What a great poem. Love it.
S |
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| Reviewed by R.D. Pounds |
7/30/2003 |
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You not only rose to the challenge, my dear Hart, you surpassed yourself and all of my expectations. :):):)
Gina |
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| Reviewed by Cheryl Sellers |
7/30/2003 |
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enjoyable to read and reread in case I missed something in the first ... and I did..
thinking if I read it again I will find something new yet again |
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| Reviewed by OnepoetGem * |
7/28/2003 |
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| Simply lovely H. You really put the hurting on this one. G |
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| Reviewed by Marie Wadsworth |
7/28/2003 |
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Will my love be the actor
starring in the love story
playing in your heart
giving
an Oscar winning performance
with every beat of your heart
... Definitely an award winner. Romance is a competitive genre but this really shines. Bravo.
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| Reviewed by Mark Mahoney |
7/28/2003 |
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| Very well expressed from a very well expresed mind...thanks for this pleasure...take care...Mark ... |
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| Reviewed by E. Lucas-Taylor |
7/28/2003 |
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| WEll now, that is a mighty fine poem. |
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| Reviewed by Marilyn Seray |
7/28/2003 |
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| Oh this is so sensual. the pic is awesome |
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| Reviewed by Zenith Elliott |
7/28/2003 |
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| This was a visual delight, excellent sensual write! ~Z~ |
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| Reviewed by Sara Coslett |
7/27/2003 |
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| Oh Ron, this is fantastic. If you are all of this to her then she will be yours to keep. |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
7/27/2003 |
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| A very gentle but sensual extravaganza, love it! |
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| Reviewed by Linda Hill |
7/27/2003 |
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~Exquisite! You held me
spellbound with every line.
Romance at its best!!!
~~Linda~~ |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
7/27/2003 |
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| This is an excellent write! |
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| Reviewed by Trixie Love |
7/27/2003 |
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Hi Ron,
Beautiful delicate write...
Trixie :) |
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| Reviewed by Debra Stiles, The Original Mister |
7/27/2003 |
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"Will my passion
be a chariot of fire
delivering the torch
used to light your ecstasy"
First I though this was a wonderful line until I read this one
"My ears are on their knees
begging your tongue
to tell
what will I be to you?"
Excellent come back, excellent write
Mister
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) |
7/27/2003 |
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| Truly lovely, sensual and intriguing! |
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| Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan |
7/27/2003 |
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Ohhh..my knees are weak!!!!
Loved this.. :>)
Jenni |
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