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| Reviewed by Monette Bebow-Reinhard (Reader) |
2/19/2005 |
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Echoes the cruel tortures of false love and overweening pride and how life is wasted through lack of honesty. Very deep and powerful, worthy of revisiting by those of us searching for truth. Thank you for sharing this.
Monette |
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| Reviewed by Jim Dunlap |
4/30/2004 |
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| This is poignant and dark at the same time. |
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| Reviewed by Susan Barton (Reader) |
3/15/2004 |
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You would look back for the last time
To envision the festivities of your life
You will perceive only the fiesta of deep sorrows
And darkening silhouette of your bemused love.
How tragic! Wonderfully thought provoking poem.
SueB |
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| Reviewed by Eddie Thompson |
3/10/2004 |
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| very encompassing, capturing poetry...nicely done. |
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| Reviewed by Regina Pounds |
1/26/2004 |
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A feast indeed, with a banquet that offers too much...
May you sample only the best, Ashraf.
Great work.
Gina |
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| Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz |
1/20/2004 |
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Ashraf...this is a deeply moving meditation
on the fragility of love as displayed by the
youthful pride of wantoness. I love the way
you compared this part of life to seasons.
It goes in my library. And I salute you! |
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| Reviewed by Mark Mahoney |
1/18/2004 |
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| Wonderfully written, and a pleasure to read, something here for us all, take care...Mark... |
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| Reviewed by Sandra Corona |
1/14/2004 |
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Whoa! I thought the fall of my life, instead of the spring, would be my time of reflection. It is, but it also is still a time of discovery :)! Well done.
:)Sandy |
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| Reviewed by Gwendolyn Thomas Gath |
1/13/2004 |
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"Feast Of Life"
A well expressed and beautiful write!
Ashraf, thank you for sharing
all your lovely works.
Sending the best,
Gwendolyn
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
1/12/2004 |
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| Excellently expressed and deeply moving. Thank you for this offering. Love and peace to you. Regis |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
1/12/2004 |
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| Richly prepared for my table. |
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| Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic |
1/12/2004 |
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For you were not sure if it will ever
Bloom in the valleys of your
Crumbling, trembling arid heart
indeed...this piece is perfection...it is going into my library wherein I can savour it again and again..ty Ashraf!
Vesna |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
1/11/2004 |
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| extrememly well written ... great finale ... |
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| Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya |
1/10/2004 |
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| WoW...Ashraf....excellent write...enjoyed this very much!!!! |
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| Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader) |
1/9/2004 |
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| Beautifully written Ashraf, the last verse I really loved. I looked at some of your paintings...wonderful work. Floria |
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| Reviewed by ya mama (Reader) |
1/9/2004 |
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| a well crafted poem you have here |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
1/9/2004 |
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Excellent lines here Ashraf!!
"When the spring of your life will be over
And you will be passing through
The hushed valley of your fading world
You would look back for the last time
To envision the festivities of your life
You will perceive only the fiesta of deep sorrows
And darkening silhouette of your bemused love"
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader) |
1/8/2004 |
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| BRILLIANT work, Ashraf! |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
1/8/2004 |
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| A poem filled with pathos, beautifully written!...thank you..Eileen |
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