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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
6/4/2012 |
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YIKES!!!!!!!!!!! This one sent chills up my spine....very well penned, Jerry...the imagery is deadly!
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| Reviewed by Vivian Dawson |
6/3/2012 |
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Such a gift you have *Jerry*
giving us such great mystery
from Your Haunted of Bolton!!!!
Lady Vivian |
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| Reviewed by Sandy Hoynacki |
6/3/2012 |
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I like the surrealism painted in your words. As a previous
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| Reviewed by Laura Fall |
6/2/2012 |
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A suspenseful write Jerry written so fascinating indeed as always terrific poetry Laura
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
6/2/2012 |
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Jerry,
you capture the sense of aloneness
and isolation, those at the margin,
the shadows, the uneasy presences
we're half aware of;
i like this very much
john |
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| Reviewed by Diana Legun |
6/2/2012 |
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| I see that your cheap, chilled California burgundy clouded none of your writing today ( I prefer my cheap California burgundy unchilled). Do you believe that artists are often their most artistic when loosened by spirit water? I think the answer is somewhere in the middle, like everything. There is assurance and acceptance in this piece of poetry. Solid, shocking, "I can stand there for hours," and "as if I've missed my ride" are suspense-evoked images. This is a pillar of a write. ~~ Diana |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
6/2/2012 |
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| You have a knack for taking us inside the mind of one such as these as if you have been trained in forensics - especially with your choice of telling detail. Love especially the first two stanzas which set the scene and character depiction admirably - can feel those canvas eyes that follow every move! Another great poem that maintains the Bolton brand. xx |
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| Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley |
6/2/2012 |
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Creepy! Hitchcock! Really really good. I liked this!
More more more :)
Love and Light
Lily |
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| Reviewed by Budd Nelson |
6/2/2012 |
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Jerry,
A wonderful thriller keep them coming.
Budd |
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