|Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci
|Verily you have been smitten! She is bound to see your sincerity. Hang in there!
|Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
|This is so raw and emotional....very touching write, Jerry....
|Reviewed by Shirley Houston
|Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
|So much sadness in this one *Jerry*
as your soul is exposed...I will
pray for an awakening from your
female companion that your love
is real in riches from the heart
|Reviewed by pat medlin
|words won't do on this one jerry...all i have to offer is a simple soft smile and feelings of ssorrow for the young in their 'not-knowing'|
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|Point, match, well spoken...e|
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|That's okay. Women love words. Especially poems as well crafted as this one. And talk always help too. Women love talk.
|Reviewed by Richard King
|The King has made his ruling. Judgement for the defense. Case closed.|
|Reviewed by Odin Roark
|I found this most compelling, in that it streamed with seemingly little regard for perfection of expression, but relied on the need and compulsion to ground the emotion before it might do harm to you. In doing so, it became its own perfection. The untouchable love is often expressed with different words in the teachings of Zen, but always, as in your honesty here, expressed and sent out into the ether for absorption and lessons.|
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|When it comes to love there are no limits it is what it is, wow, you did unleash here and I love it!|
|Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley
|Oh Jerry, this is truly beautiful - such deep intimate emotions for the heart that has finally found the meaning of love... sigh to say
"she's the only one to truly be loved by me
love was never mine to have
therefore I could not give it
until she came into my life"
You have no idea how beautiful these words are... I have known others who also have come to this point of recognition. We are to learn love through the experiences of our lives and sometimes it takes a special soul to open the door to the heart. Keep the door open Jerry, love is such a beautiful thing. For "merely" words have you now alive.
"lend an ear
of all the ones I've whispered
I love you to
she's the only one to truly be loved by me"
Even your testimony to others as if to say Listen! This was my past now I am alive for this special one that is untouchable is the "only one to truly be loved by me..."
Love and Light
|Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Untouchable..touchable..never rest your case when you love so deeply.