|Reviewed by JMS Bell
|THE 'BEGINNING' OF AN 'END'. WELL DONE, ASA. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS|
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|"...my life is settled now with no umbrella..."
no need for a shield of any sort, the truth is undisguised, pure and tangible, the lesson learned...and that's the main thing.
Asa, your road is bright, forgiving and wise.
|Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
|Joyce, your son's last four lines say it all.|
|Reviewed by Mary Grace Patterson
|From the depths of dispair , comes light! From living, learning and paying the price, you have gained much incite into the world around you and the mistakes made. Keep writing and sharing with us ! Your poems are great and heartfelt!....M|
|Reviewed by Janet Caldwell
Your pen flows with truth and humility. Just crazy about the lines
"But your rejection can be compared
to a 'southern bell's'
dislike for a northerner;
Excellent poem, Praying for you and your Mon who has been a friend for quite some time. God bless you!!!!
|Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
|Sometimes I think that if I have one more "learning experience," I'll throw up! You have a great 'tude, my friend. Let that be a lesson to h i m !:) xOx 'Pea' xOx|
|Reviewed by lili dauphin
|Good job. Keep up the good work.|
|Reviewed by Shedding Light
|Thanks for sharing your sons work. This is a heart felt piece!
Harold M. Nash
|Reviewed by Richard Arrington
|"I guess I am rewarded
with nothing, more or less,
than an extremely good
Lesson Learned." only the wise learn. This is very good work.
|Reviewed by Inspire Hope
|Asa dear you have gained so much more than an extremely good lesson learned! Though painful it is and you may not see it now, but God is working out His Masterful plan for your life! Your poems have so much depth and touches the spirit within, very heartfelt Asa you hold onto your faith God is up to something. do not give up and keep on writing and sharing, and oh don't stop caring!
Love And Prayers
|Reviewed by Ankin Timourian
|I assume this is your name, dear Asa. We all make mistakes in life, no one is perfect, but the difference is the severity of that mistake…and we all suffer the consequences of our wrong doings one way or another. Just hang in there; there is always light at the end of the tunnel. The important thing is if you admit and realize your wrong doing, God is always with you and he will forgive you…maybe she will too… Don’t lose your hope and keep on writing, because writing could be the best therapy for you. You write very well, it shows that you have really changed and becoming more and more wise. Hugs, Ankin|
|Reviewed by Ann Marquette
|Hm! never heard this one 'southern bell's'
dislike for a northerner;" interesting!
Keep writing son, of Joyce Bell.
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|..I love the saying... 'live and learn, some people just live'|
|Reviewed by Georg Mateos
|The trick is not to learn lessons, but how we apply them to our life. Wanting for a better life is the first step after the lesson.