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| Reviewed by David Blair |
9/30/2012 |
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| Enjoy your writing Asa. You have a sound message to the site's readers. Glad you enjoyed On The Moon. |
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| Reviewed by Odin Roark |
9/4/2012 |
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| or... as on a different level---that of "friendship": a friend is someone who's there for you when they'd rather be anywhere else. with love, especially when it transcends object necessity, is a state of mind, not body. |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
4/17/2012 |
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| THE BIRDS AND BEES DO IT...BUT WHAT THIS POET ENVISIONS IS SO MUCH DEEPER THAN THAT. WELL DONE AND ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND MUCH FAITH...JOYCE(MOM)*HIS INSPIRATIONS |
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| Reviewed by Ruan Burke |
3/13/2012 |
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| You certainly know how to set a scene, Asa. The image this creates in the mind's eye is absolute. I can feel the coolness of the rain and the softness of a hand holding mine as I read. Very nicely penned. |
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| Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson |
1/19/2011 |
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| There is much depth and wisdom in this poem. Asa has captured the essence of love and the commitment that goes with it...M |
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| Reviewed by Z McClure |
12/8/2010 |
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In a culture that has misunderstood what love truly is, Asa's poem shines like a beacon in the darkness...
I hope and ask the Lord to open many eyes.
-Z.B.McClure |
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| Reviewed by Art Sun |
11/17/2010 |
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Nice work...love is an emotion that is hidden, until we come to realize its many characters within us...
nice... |
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| Reviewed by Douglas Bentley |
11/15/2010 |
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I agree with both Christine's - emotional & beautiful
intimate and profound.
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| Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse |
11/15/2010 |
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His words are beautiful...
there is no sacrifice to walk in the rain
it is a pleasure to share such beautiful moments
with another person...even a friend...
Love's passion and pleasure is a circumference
of all things shared
Love's Bounty & Pools
Vickie |
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| Reviewed by Ann Marquette |
11/15/2010 |
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Asa, this is truly beautiful. Keep on writing.
Blessings to you and your Mom :-)
ann |
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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
11/15/2010 |
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Beautiful poetry, Asa! You have captured the essence of true love in your lovely phrasing! Heartfelt write!
Anna |
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| Reviewed by Daniel Keith |
11/14/2010 |
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Beautiful poem Asa. Keep sight of true love and follow your heart with the knowledge the Lord has blessed you with. Keep your faith and stay strong. May God bless you every day of your life.
Daniel |
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| Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather |
11/14/2010 |
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| great mood in this poem. Morgan |
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| Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper |
11/14/2010 |
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| Mood, emotion, feeling and thoughtfulness are all combined in this poem. Very nicely done, Asa. Keep writing. |
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| Reviewed by Emile Tubiana |
11/13/2010 |
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| Dear Joyce this a wonderful poem that Asa wrote last year. Thank you for sharing it. Love Emile |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
11/13/2010 |
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Joyce, Asa has written this with such emotion..it is beautiful! thanks for sharing this..I hope he is doing good~
Love,
Chrissy |
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| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
11/13/2010 |
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| BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
11/12/2010 |
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Asa demonstrates real feeling, Joyce, and understands the difference between what does and doesn't matter...giving to others is the true path.
John |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
11/12/2010 |
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| Marvelous |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
11/12/2010 |
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Most insightful and worthy of reflection; thank you for sharing Asa's philosophy, Joyce. Love and blessings to you and to him,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by TONY NERONE |
11/12/2010 |
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Excellent piece of writing.
GOD BLESS YOU
TONY |
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| Reviewed by Paul Berube |
11/12/2010 |
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| An excellent write, my friend. God bless. |
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| Reviewed by Christine Tsen |
11/12/2010 |
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Your eloquent poem models a deeper intimate connection, a profound poem.
Blessings,
Christine |
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