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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
4/16/2012 |
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| THIS IS A TRUTH THAT CANNOT BE IGNORED OR DENIED AND THESE 'CLUBS' DO EXIST BECAUSE OF THE 'LUST' FOR MORE AND MORE MONEY...REGARDLESS OF THE CONSEQUENCES. CONSEQUENCES...WHICH ARE ALWAYS SAD AND MANY TIMES SO DEVASTATING WITH THE TRAGIC DESTRUCTION OF HUMAN LIVES AND OUR NATURAL RESOURCES. YOU HAVE APTLY DESCRIBED THE 'DOOM' OF OUR VERY EXISTENCE. A TIMELY WORK DONE SO VERY WELL. THANK YOU, SON AND GOD BLESS YOU. LOVE AND MUCH FAITH....JOYCE(MOM)*HIS INSPIRATIONS |
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| Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson |
9/10/2011 |
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| You have touched on a subject that affects so many in various ways. They say money can be the root of evil, but thats not always true. In any society, the almighy dollar can buy some things which otherwise might be unobtainable. Your words give one much to think about. I understand what it's like where you are as my son has been through some of it also. Keep writing and sharing Asa . You are truely gifted....M |
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| Reviewed by Mary Lacey, Desertrat |
8/18/2011 |
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Joyce,
How true, some people are so clannish. Your son is very talented.
Mary |
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| Reviewed by Barbara Henry |
8/15/2011 |
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Very profound message,Asa and one that needs to be told repeatedly.
To your continued success.
Barbara J. Henry |
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| Reviewed by Jon Willey |
8/11/2011 |
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| Asa, in my parlance this are the world's ever growing population of "plastic people". Aggressive, obtrusive, disingenuous, ego centric paper cut out people. Reality, morality, ethics are not a part of their personalities. Their every move, word and action is, MEEEEEEE! You've summed this real life scenario up quite well in your, "CLUBS'US". I bid you love and peace. Jon Michael |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
7/27/2011 |
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Sharp and oh so relevant, Asa,
your finger on the pulse of real agenda..
you have this right and i like the style
you choose to communicate it.
Stay strong and focused.
John |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
7/20/2011 |
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an excellent write Asa
brings to light the tip of the iceberg of society clubs
that only worries about their own interest........
Peace be with you you all
William
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| Reviewed by Paul Judges |
7/20/2011 |
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| A very interesting insight, Joyce. |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo |
7/9/2011 |
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| There is much to ponder in this piece. "Private" clubs of all kinds exist: some are purely evil, some are filled with the greedy and selfish, and only a very few welcome all. A sad truth, but well written. God bless. ~Elizabeth |
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| Reviewed by Joy Hale |
7/9/2011 |
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Asa,
Your powerful words ring a blatant truth! The ultra wealthy are a different breed from most of us and some, not all, are very arrogant re: their wealth. The majority of people have a regular or somewhat middle income existence and they are the people on this earth who are, for the most part, REAL down-to-earth people and I say ... God bless them! Your take on this subject is awesome and well penned. Let us not, as a people, ever join this private club of greed.
Well done, keep writing. Joy L. Hale |
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| Reviewed by J.A. Aarntzen |
7/7/2011 |
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| We all want to belong to the haves but when you really look at it, it is the have nots that have the people of substance and character and make far better company than the haves. Great work Asa! |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart |
7/6/2011 |
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| You hit it on the nail Asa. Shameful when life is centered on making money and ignoring more important things. |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
7/6/2011 |
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Substance to ponder upon for sure; than you for sharing Asa's verses, Joyce. Love and blessings to you both,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Christine Tsen |
7/4/2011 |
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Powerful lyrics!
Blessings,
Christine |
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| Reviewed by Daniel Keith |
7/4/2011 |
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Powerful words in this poem, but oh so true. Keep the faith Asa, and keep writing. May God bless you every day of your life.
Daniel |
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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
7/4/2011 |
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Sadly it's truth you write about, Asa....too many in this world focus on the stuff that doesn't matter in the end.....some very powerful phrasing here. Well done! Keep on writing....
Anna |
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| Reviewed by Ann Marquette |
7/3/2011 |
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| Very good Asa. |
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| Reviewed by Laura Fall |
7/3/2011 |
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Wonderfully written poem indeed Laura
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| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
7/3/2011 |
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| WONDERFUL POEM!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva |
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| Reviewed by TONY NERONE |
7/2/2011 |
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I wrked in both the Metropolitan, and Williams clubs. You needed to be very wealthy to join. The filthy rich flaunt themselves because of there millions. 99 percent made those millions illegal. Thanks for sharing this powerful writing, Asa.
GOD BLESS YOU
Tony |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
7/2/2011 |
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| No country exists where you will not find these elitist. |
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