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D r e a m V i s i o n
by Asa D. Seeley

Friday, August 19, 2011
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When one dares to envision impossible dreams...then...the the limit!



I woke up today and looked out of the window

the sky had come down and turned into the ground

I guess I'll go outside to walk on the clouds

and when the wind blows...I'll walk up beside the sun

To receive warmth

Of course...I see what I feel!




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Reviewed by Odin Roark 9/4/2012
Remaining aware of sentient gifts--nurturing them, avoiding any weakness of a damage-driven-ego vying for self destruction either through self-loathing and or altered states of consciousness to escape or get attention--this piece jumps off the page with High of an inquisitive mind, a mind that is ready to fire up upon rising, imagine and make his or her own reality. Loved the subtextual energy in this.
Reviewed by Sandy Hoynacki (Reader) 8/11/2012
Thank you, Asa, for sharing your beauty in words of art..Such a pleasure to read your work. You're very talented. I hope you know this.
God bless you always and in all ways..

Reviewed by Vicky Semones 8/8/2012
Mom, the images are amazingly appropriate to each poem. Asa, we are all imprisoned within ourselves, until we deeply surrender to the 'one' Divine energy that supersedes each of mankind's constructions. It is in each of us and is every one of us. You have the vision. Believe in your soul. Do not measure yourself by the world's expectations.
Blessings, Vicky
Reviewed by dan Rosenhagen 5/17/2012
A vision within the bounds of the earth, with a mind, heart and soul,
that is boundless, Your expression here Asa, is truely an insight from within, and can only be seen by one who dwells in its depth and forms his expression from the clay entwined with its roots. Beautiful work!

Reviewed by Thomasena Martin-Johnson 4/29/2012

You need a spanking. Mama, Spank his b------. You are so talented. The imagery is unbelieviable. There are no impossible dreams.
Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley 4/20/2012
As I also felt this, so lovely... I like this vision. :)
Reviewed by JMS Bell 4/15/2012
Reviewed by Suzie Palmer 3/23/2012
Glorious vision shared!!! xox :-)
Reviewed by Ruan Mills Burke 3/13/2012
It is in the poet's skill to portray such a ambience as this. You have that skill,Asa. It shows in every word. It would be great to see you published.
Reviewed by Kenny Baez 3/12/2012
He's brought the sun a little nearer today with this upside down poem that works beautifully and illustrates the excellent maxim, KISS, keep it simple, stupid! Hope the clouds roll by soon for Asa!
Reviewed by Laurel Lamperd 3/5/2012
Lovely description. Sometimes the sea becomes the sky or a mountain vanishes into a cloud. thank you for reading my poem. Rainbows
Reviewed by Ronald Hull 9/17/2011
You have the walking on clouds.

Reviewed by Andy Turner 9/12/2011
Superb. To feel what one sees and be able to articulate it in such a lucid way is a gift worth keeping.
Reviewed by Daniel Keith 9/11/2011
Keep the hopes and the dreams alive Asa. Well written. May God bless you every day of your life.

Reviewed by Clarence Prince 9/9/2011
"Dream Vision" indeed, Joyce! Yet it's lovely, there should be blessings coming for Asa, soon!
Reviewed by jude forese 8/29/2011
a wonderful vision indeed!
Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson 8/28/2011
There is much depth in Asa's poem! His imagery produces visions that can be crafted into individual ideas and thoughts....M
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo 8/23/2011
Deep words of purity unfolding like a delicate flower....

Be always safe,
Reviewed by John Domino 8/23/2011
Exceptional poetry from the heart. Keep on writing poems like these for you never know the life you will touch.

Yours in the love of Christ,

John Michael Domino
Reviewed by Jon Willey 8/23/2011
"dream vision" is opening the door that unlocks all possibilities -- imagination and creativity flow in endless streams from that portal -- Asa, your expression captures that moment of personal enlightenment quickly, poetically -- I bid you peace -- Jon Michael
Reviewed by Christine Alwin 8/22/2011
..this brings me to tears..WOW!
Reviewed by Amber Moonstone 8/22/2011
I love the directness of this poem. Very nicely written!

Peace, love and light,
Reviewed by Glen Manese 8/22/2011
Liked how the last line fits everything into unison... Of course...I see what I feel... The picture sets this off in motion... Thanks for sharing...
Reviewed by Annabel Sheila 8/22/2011
From the heart and soul of a poet comes writing such as inspire and tweak the imagination! Creative and uplifting! Well done, Asa! Never let the ink in your quill dry up! You are a wonderful writer!

Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather 8/20/2011
so much said in lines that flow and are as uplifting as the warm light. Thanks for sharing. ~ Morgan
Reviewed by Laura Fall 8/20/2011
Wonderfully written poetry indeed Laura
Reviewed by Christine Tsen 8/20/2011
You help us to venture forth today with understanding and vision ~
Wonderful poem!
Reviewed by Paul Berube 8/20/2011
Nicely done.
Reviewed by Liana Margiva 8/20/2011
VERY BEAUTIFUL, TALENTED!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Reviewed by Ann Marquette 8/19/2011
Very good...I really like this piece Asa.
Reviewed by TONY NERONE 8/19/2011
Asa wrote a short but very sweet piece here. I would like for him to publish his poetry. He certainly has the talent for it.
GOD BLESS YOU, Joyce, and Asa too.
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 8/19/2011
Nicely done, Asa. I can relate to what you have shared through your verses here. Thank you and thank you, Joyce for sharing this. Love and peace and blessings,

Reviewed by John Flanagan 8/19/2011
You have that quick and direct way of catching
and holding the reader...words, mood
and point of view penetrate and stay.

Thank you, Joyce, for sharing with us.


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