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Passionate writing is all consuming and blesses all who read it!
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Ink flows/
fluent/
like fire/
fanning outward/
ascending/
skyward/
horizontal brisance/
sets the firmament ablaze/
as the Quill & I/
fuse/
becoming one/
flame/
fulminating clangor/
resonating in my brain/
Brilliant illuminations/
spring forth, valient......unafraid/
mesmeric lyrics/
my heart's sweet repose/
songs from my spirit/
pennings of my soul/
precipitating verses/
metrically inclined/
satiates the Earth/
below/
transforming sacred lives/
Ink flows/
fluent/
raging like fire/
fanning outward/
ascending/
skyward/
horizontal brisance/
sets the firmament ablaze/
as the Quill & I/
fuse/
becoming one/
flame...
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| Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci |
7/5/2012 |
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I see your upwardness at the end of each line! I like your style and of course your words!
Love ya!
Jane |
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| Reviewed by Amor Sabor |
4/8/2012 |
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| There are vivid lines in this write in the midst of flames |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
4/8/2012 |
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| inspired and well written ... (what's with the slashes? /) |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
4/7/2012 |
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Some hot, passionate licks here. But I, alas, can no longer hold the quilt in hand. Still, through the ether of binary digits, I color my world with pixelated vibrance that outshines even the sun and stars with my passion as deep and vivid as Van Gogh's.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Lonnie Hicks |
4/6/2012 |
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| great write and the use of at least two new words. Good Stuff Shirley |
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| Reviewed by Diana Legun |
4/6/2012 |
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| Yes, passionate writing blesses all who read it, and keeps our dictionaries from looking too new. I'll have to go online to find 'brisance,' maybe it's French, but oh how wonderful I find your writing! ~~ Diana |
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| Reviewed by pat medlin |
4/6/2012 |
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| apt description of those times we 'hit a roll'....nice one shirley |
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