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Even when we know someone is not good for us, we still sometimes vacillate in deciding whether to leave them or stay.
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The poet rides recessive tides/
tangled in regret-filled thoughts/
stuck between hope & despair/
torn between yore & fresh air.....
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
6/2/2012 |
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keep writing this way and you will do great
excellent piece....
Peace be with you
William |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner |
5/24/2012 |
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Exactly, how many of us remain suffocating in the stench, when there is fresh air so easily there to be breathed.
Oh boy, I so relate to this. |
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| Reviewed by Asa Seeley |
5/23/2012 |
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not only the poet, but every man has 'things' they need to deny for the betterment of 'self'. thanks for share.
asa |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
5/19/2012 |
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i like these lines, Shirley,
in particular, the final one - that use
of 'fresh air' is telling and strong
john |
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| Reviewed by Richard King |
5/19/2012 |
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My take? - The poet should seek the solution offering the best opportunity for future happiness for themselves and any dependents.
Please see MESSAGES for a personal comment. Dick |
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