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| Reviewed by Christine Tsen |
7/6/2012 |
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| Softly spoken and truly creative ~ |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
7/6/2012 |
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A rich metaphor for coming out of ourselves and seeking deeper, if not more dangerous, territory. Lovely.
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| Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse |
7/5/2012 |
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Glorious Bounty Through Gaia Mother & her jewels
you see them & you have penned them so eloquently!!
I see the river too
Let Your Emeralds & Diamonds Flow
Adorning You with more Precious Gaia Gemstones
Vickie |
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| Reviewed by Laura Fall |
7/5/2012 |
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Truly beautifully written poetry Laura
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
7/5/2012 |
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Nature really can cosole us, if we just listen. Your poem is touching in so many ways! ty for this!
Christine |
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| Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger |
7/5/2012 |
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Crystals shimmer on emerald leaves, tantalizing poetry.
Beautifully penned Shirley
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| Reviewed by D. Vaineo |
7/5/2012 |
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Shirley, Your words are your truths and carry us also into the deep!
Deborah |
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| Reviewed by Odin Roark |
7/5/2012 |
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| Ah, the inevitable "safe harbor" revealed as yet another fraudulent and"arid" (misspelled in your poem) trick to keep us captured. Your poem suggests the power of the 5 senses, the gift of sentient ability, and the call to "allow" freedom to rule our decisions. Purposeful and arresting. |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton |
7/5/2012 |
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| I'm immersed in the poem also, Shirley, especially finding that pot of gold at the end of the parched driveway. At least you won't have to travel far for riches untold. Sometimes breaking away from your safe harbors is the right thing to do. |
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| Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley |
7/5/2012 |
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This is a beautiful writing, what you write is felt Shirley and I see it through my eyes. I feel all written here, it is cooling as it moves through me. I am "immersed" in this poem.
Beautiful
Love and Light
Lily |
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