|Reviewed by un ted
|visual and seductive, now i want to visit that place for myself! Thank you.|
|Reviewed by Dark Knight
|Reviewed by Richard Nedervelt (Reader)
|Aloha, Mary. It was wonderful chatting with you and Ronald today. It was such a wonderful experience and I appreciate everything you both had to share. I just read this poem and found it breathtaking with all of its many many layers. Whether from a sensual interpretation or an awakening, or even as a passing poem, this poem reveals so much so wonderfully. Thanks and keep up the words. :-) Richard|
|Reviewed by John Domino
|Nicely done. One can visualize a wonderful night in the tropics.
Florida is not too bad either. However I have been to The Islands a few times and it is special. Where does one go to have this vision?
|Reviewed by Sandi Schraut
|I feel awsh in discriptive detail, wonderful!!!!! Sandi|
|Reviewed by Lois Christensen
|Hearing the surf, lying near the ocean, a dream of mine forever. You painted a lovely scene and a beautiful night into morning.|
|Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
|love your verse Mary, it is sexy, sensual and heart throbbing|
|Reviewed by Dark Knight
|the images in the poem painted pictures on my mind-well done!|
|Reviewed by Bill Grimes Jr.
|"stretch in a bath of light"
Very beautiful work Mary!
|Reviewed by J.L. Day
|Perfectly tantalizing, suprisingly mesmerizing, definately appetizing. I adored this piece!|
|Reviewed by Bhakta Giri
|A sensual one and i like it. Good blend of metaphors of similies. Thanx for sharing.
|Reviewed by Ashraf Goreja (Reader)
|Most beautiful poem. Well worded and excellent write.
|Reviewed by The Gentle Man
|a very tender and sensual poem....very well done!|
|Reviewed by Jim McClellan
|celestial. at one with the night, garbless and taking it in. wonderful write!
|Reviewed by Austin Akalanze
|sort of sensual. got me ...!|
|Reviewed by Ron Dondiego
|Oh, this was really beautiful - sensual and mysterious. Ron|
|Reviewed by Jerry Andrews
|Hi- Mary- I've spent some time in Brazil and Fiji and other such places and you capture
the sensual feel and cool, cool luxury of that sweet slumber very well indeed. I enjoyed it. When you have time read my Long Gone Love and Old Souls. You'll like them. I'll be reading you. Jerry
|Reviewed by Maria Cristina Azcona
|There are two things I love:
soulful poetry and rhythmic poetry.
Both are here.
|Reviewed by Anwer Sher (Reader)
|awesome in a simple word|
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|very good write!!|