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| Reviewed by Dark Knight |
9/29/2012 |
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| very nice |
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| Reviewed by Richard Nedervelt (Reader) |
12/1/2011 |
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| Aloha, Mary. It was wonderful chatting with you and Ronald today. It was such a wonderful experience and I appreciate everything you both had to share. I just read this poem and found it breathtaking with all of its many many layers. Whether from a sensual interpretation or an awakening, or even as a passing poem, this poem reveals so much so wonderfully. Thanks and keep up the words. :-) Richard |
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| Reviewed by John Domino |
12/21/2009 |
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Nicely done. One can visualize a wonderful night in the tropics.
Florida is not too bad either. However I have been to The Islands a few times and it is special. Where does one go to have this vision? |
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| Reviewed by Sandi Schraut |
7/22/2008 |
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| I feel awsh in discriptive detail, wonderful!!!!! Sandi |
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| Reviewed by Lois Christensen |
6/6/2008 |
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| Hearing the surf, lying near the ocean, a dream of mine forever. You painted a lovely scene and a beautiful night into morning. |
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| Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper |
5/5/2008 |
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| love your verse Mary, it is sexy, sensual and heart throbbing |
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| Reviewed by Dark Knight |
6/5/2007 |
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| the images in the poem painted pictures on my mind-well done! |
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| Reviewed by Bill Grimes Jr. |
2/26/2007 |
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"stretch in a bath of light"
Very beautiful work Mary!
Peace,
Bill |
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| Reviewed by J.L. Day |
1/9/2007 |
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| Perfectly tantalizing, suprisingly mesmerizing, definately appetizing. I adored this piece! |
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| Reviewed by Bhakta Giri |
11/28/2006 |
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A sensual one and i like it. Good blend of metaphors of similies. Thanx for sharing.
Bhakta |
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| Reviewed by Ashraf Goreja |
9/17/2003 |
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Most beautiful poem. Well worded and excellent write.
Greetings.
Goreja.com |
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| Reviewed by The Gentle Man |
8/26/2003 |
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| a very tender and sensual poem....very well done! |
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| Reviewed by Jim McClellan |
5/31/2003 |
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celestial. at one with the night, garbless and taking it in. wonderful write!
Mac =) |
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| Reviewed by Austin Akalanze |
4/20/2003 |
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| sort of sensual. got me ...! |
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| Reviewed by Ron Dondiego |
4/4/2003 |
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| Oh, this was really beautiful - sensual and mysterious. Ron |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Andrews |
2/22/2003 |
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Hi- Mary- I've spent some time in Brazil and Fiji and other such places and you capture
the sensual feel and cool, cool luxury of that sweet slumber very well indeed. I enjoyed it. When you have time read my Long Gone Love and Old Souls. You'll like them. I'll be reading you. Jerry |
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| Reviewed by Maria Cristina Azcona |
1/13/2003 |
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There are two things I love:
soulful poetry and rhythmic poetry.
Both are here. |
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| Reviewed by Anwer Sher |
1/3/2003 |
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| awesome in a simple word |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
10/8/2002 |
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| very good write!! |
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