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| Reviewed by John Domino |
4/21/2009 |
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What a GREAT idea!
I lived in Japan for three years.
We gomountaintop.
Thenseetrees aplenty.
After we golake
Rapid boatride too.
Whenfinished allwet.
So bring changeclothes.
OK???
Funnny!. |
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| Reviewed by Prometheus Media |
4/27/2004 |
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| Nice one |
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| Reviewed by Jim Dunlap |
2/4/2004 |
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| What a small world. I signed your other poem and didn't even realize that you had been on the Showemall Writers' Block. This is a cute poem. |
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| Reviewed by Austin Akalanze |
4/20/2003 |
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| Coming from Nigeria, pigeon is my unofficial lingua franca. I enjoyed. Thanks for sharing. |
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| Reviewed by Marco Landi |
4/8/2003 |
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| very cute....ciao |
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| Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green |
3/6/2003 |
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Love it!:) Rhyme is usually my bag, but this is right-on. Thanks for starting my day with a laugh. Phyllis:) ::::>
PS: Like your bio, too. What a fascinating
background you have...and we share a love
for Steinbeck. Aloha! |
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| Reviewed by Josephine Bohen |
10/9/2002 |
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I think I think in pigeon
can I move to Hawaii now?
josie |
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| Reviewed by Larry Skahill (Reader) |
10/8/2002 |
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very nice
glad its fixed |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
10/8/2002 |
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| funny and delightful write!! LOL |
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