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| Reviewed by Linda Settles |
4/23/2009 |
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| This poem makes me think of experiences my own daughters have gone through recently. Trusting our heart to the care of another is a foolish, wonderful, courageous thing to do. The nature of love itself is risk--God risked the eternal fellowship of his son when he sent him to earth robed in the fragility of flesh. To love is to risk. There is no pain so powerful as love disappointed. I'm glad you printed the disclaimer (not personal, etc.)else I would have asked you his name. (not really :-) Authenticity rules in this poetic piece. |
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| Reviewed by SOULFUL SHEE G. Pulsing In Passionate Purple PassionS |
4/17/2009 |
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Spoken of many lives, when dominance "tries" to rule1
I enjoyed"MY KING"
downright life filled with depth of honest feelings shared!
Being a Taker is not for me either, a giver - gives from the heart and wants too, without any strings attached and when "YOU" are HAPPY! THEY are HAPPY Truthfully and not in a fake kind of way!
STay Positive!
WRITE ON!
Warmest Blessings of Love, Light, PEACE and Inspirations, Warrior Purple Lady SHEExooo
Psss...Where is the picture, or beautiful artwork I expected to see somewhere HERE! I loved the poem as it did stand on it's own merit Gwend! |
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| Reviewed by Zahra V |
4/16/2009 |
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This piece is very heartfelt. Thanks for sharing!!
Zahra |
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| Reviewed by dennis stanfield |
3/26/2009 |
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very very nice.. you have a very creative mind and perspective. truely enjoyed
dennis |
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| Reviewed by kenny baez |
3/25/2009 |
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| Yes, freedom can be more important than love, unless you have met your soulmate and then you enjoy 'freedom' together. best wishes! |
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| Reviewed by Linda Law |
3/23/2009 |
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| This piece is one that many go thru in life; giving, giving, while another takes and takes until there is nothing left... Poignant. hugs, lindalaw |
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| Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson |
3/23/2009 |
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| A masterpiece! It touches the soul of life.......M |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
3/22/2009 |
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God bless you always as this is so uniquely special. Your Cafe Press is fabulous Gwendolyn, just had a chance to go into it. Took a special interest in the heartbeat clock, just precious...
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
3/22/2009 |
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A fascinating poetic write GG
Truly enjoyed reading your wonderful thoughts
Love & peace be with you
William
((((((SEMPER FI)))))))))) |
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| Reviewed by Morning Star |
3/22/2009 |
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Beautifully writing and expressed poetic thoughts
Your words captured emotions and pain
outstanding write!!
Sending you Peace Love and Light...Yolie |
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| Reviewed by OnepoetGem * |
3/21/2009 |
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| if this is non fictional Gwen, where's the sucker at, I'll bust him up, great poetic rant, hugLove&cheers |
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| Reviewed by richard cederberg |
3/21/2009 |
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A strong yet facile affirmation. Enjoyed!
Blessings ... |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
3/21/2009 |
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Powerfully expressive and meaningful, Gwendolyn. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
3/21/2009 |
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Beautiful, Gwendolyn, indeed. Can't picture you bound and chained - your poetic spirit soars in freedom in these lines. Well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Cindy Tuttle |
3/21/2009 |
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This is wonderfully written Gwen. Thank youi for writing it.It captures emotions I am sure many people feel or have felt.
With Love,
Cindy |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
3/21/2009 |
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Great write, Gwen; well done!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D |
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| Reviewed by High Country Girl |
3/20/2009 |
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I can relate to this, thanks Gwen
:) Ch'erie |
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