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| Reviewed by Dorothy Krusky |
10/13/2011 |
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| After reading this piece I found I needed to remove myself from the image within. how sad to read of a little girl's cry. This is truly a most moving piece of work. Thank you for sharing!! |
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| Reviewed by Earle Brown |
9/29/2010 |
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| Sad and touching write. |
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| Reviewed by Richard Orey |
8/4/2009 |
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Abused, alone and feeling helpless-- Is there anything more tragic?
For other viewpoints:
I invite you to read "I Can't Tell Anyone" by the amazing teenaged Authorsden writer Kathryn D at this link:
http://www.authorsden.com/visit/viewpoetry.asp?AuthorID=81720&id=217754
And my own poem, "Oh, Dear God, Tell Me Why! at this link:
http://www.authorsden.com/visit/viewpoetry.asp?AuthorID=48512&id=241322
Thank you for posting this important message, Gwendolyn.
Richard |
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| Reviewed by Stephanie Murray |
6/30/2009 |
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Full of feeling. I just want to save this little girl. Now that we are women, we can hopefully help a little girl suffering from abuse if given the chance. Well- Written.
Stephanie |
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| Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G |
6/25/2009 |
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An intense yearning for HELP from an innocent child!
I KNOW these feelings well, as I describe over and over in my poems
and my Bio page!
As I pray daily, for someone to SAVE THEM! and To be there for them, in THEIR time of NEED!
Great important poem Gwend, OUR QUEST will never END! To give love, guidance, Time, and Effort in many ways! BEING ALONE is a Terrible feeling! I KNOW! and I don't want ANY CHILD feeling that way, empty, scared, alone and YOUR BOOK will help so many!
WRITE ON!
Warmest Blessings to YOU and YOUR Family my true friend, Purple Lady Passion, SHEExooo |
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| Reviewed by ~ H (Reader) |
6/14/2009 |
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| Yes Gwen, it is terribly sad that so many are abused, little boys included. A powerful poem. Holly |
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| Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper |
6/2/2009 |
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| very powerful poem of abuse Gwen, it is a sad fact of life for some, cheers |
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| Reviewed by Sandie May Angel-Joyce |
5/30/2009 |
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Expression of helplessness is well-delivered. Wonderful write, Gwendolyn!!! Thank you for being such a wonderful friend to me. I sincerely appreciate the well-meaning friendship!!!
Lots of love,
Sandie Angel :o) |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
5/29/2009 |
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A heartfelt cry, Well expressed If only people knew what goes on behind the close door of the unfortunate abused children....
It used to make me cry....when I cossed the path of the abused child
while on patrol....many years ago
Love & peace be with you
William
((((((((((((Semper Fi)))))))))
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| Reviewed by Cindy Tuttle |
5/22/2009 |
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This touches the heart. Wonderfully written Gwendolyn.
With Love,
Cindy |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
5/22/2009 |
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| painfully powerful content expressed emphatically as well as sincerely ... |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
5/22/2009 |
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| Heart wrenching,as it is too many children being abused today,almost too painful to take! Excellent work, Gath, bless you!...ET |
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| Reviewed by richard cederberg |
5/22/2009 |
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So poignant in its deep heartfelt chasteness. Your poem, Gwendolyn, is a cry from the heart of an innocent child, a cry that unfortunately falls on far too many uncaring ears. I can feel your soul aching in this one poetess.
Blessings ... |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
5/22/2009 |
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The repetition of this one does stand out to make the point of the sweet onnocence stolen so cruelly. As a Father and grandfather I have no pity for child abuseres and yes I could come up with some very creative ways to torture them.
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
5/22/2009 |
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Powerfully penned, Gwendolyn ... well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
5/22/2009 |
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At least I could spare a little girl of abuse. My sister.
Thanks for reminding the world that we are not civilized yet when our children are the theme.
Georg
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| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
5/22/2009 |
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| Very nice poem!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
5/22/2009 |
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Powerfully searing write, Gwendolyn; very well and effectively penned! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :( >tears! <
"It shouldn't hurt to be a child..." |
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| Reviewed by Sapna George |
5/21/2009 |
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| The poem does deptices and sent the message you been trying to convey....looking forward to the book Gwendolyn Thomas Gath. |
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