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| Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper |
6/7/2008 |
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| wow some very deep poetic verse Jeff, great j o b |
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| Reviewed by Wendy Cooper (Reader) |
6/7/2008 |
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I don't know who you wrote it for but she's a VERY lucky woman for its beautiful...almost lyrical -could be set to music an make a wonderful love song.
Wendy |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bowling |
6/6/2008 |
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A beautiful write indeed! Very romantic and heartfelt...enjoyed this very much!
Blessings from Ky.
Joyce B. |
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| Reviewed by Jennifer Christian |
6/6/2008 |
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| It's great and beautiful. Full of meaning and emotion. |
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| Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse |
6/2/2008 |
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Jeff,
Your poetry is the beautiful patience of love's elegance in it's divine essence of perfection.
I enjoyed reading & feeling this angelic piece of art you have penned.
Embraced ~ Embrassé
Vickie
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| Reviewed by Barbara Terry |
6/2/2008 |
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OMG I can see why you have won awards for your writing. This is just so romantic, and the last two lines make the heart love even better than before. You have truly written a "gem" as George said for the true love of your heart. I wish you all the best in your writing. This is a 10 for sure.
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, Barbie |
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| Reviewed by Ofira Sephiroth (Reader) |
6/2/2008 |
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| Beautiful |
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| Reviewed by Barbara Smith |
6/2/2008 |
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| Jeff, I love this romantic poem that attests to "real love." A great write! |
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| Reviewed by Dale Clark |
6/2/2008 |
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| Beautiful and a perfect message |
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) |
6/2/2008 |
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| Oh my,very beautiful indeed..take care ...Hugssssss |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
6/2/2008 |
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| You have truly written a gem for the love of your life. And that candle bespeaks of the love that is in your heart and may forever burn and light up your life with your bride always beside you. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
6/2/2008 |
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| beautiful writing-beautiful longing |
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