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| Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle |
10/19/2008 |
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A very good poem.I enjoy reading it,take care
Edwin |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
10/13/2008 |
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Women will love this. However, I will take the lesser path and stick my tongue in fine wine. ;-)
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater |
10/13/2008 |
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Shakespearian Rapture! This would be a masterpiece of a script for any playwrite to adapt into a modern-day Romeo & Juliet on stage...these lines are fit for Montague's and Capulet's! I would love to hear these lines reverberating in a theatre full of Renaissance-dressed-coiffed fans who paid a week's wages and entered a night in the Concentric Convergence, the first play of Mason's Millenium! Great write fit for theatrical dialogue, Jeff...
Warmly,
Sage |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
10/13/2008 |
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| beautiful and so full of longing and passion |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Anderson |
10/13/2008 |
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| Beautifully romantic. |
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| Reviewed by m j hollingshead |
10/13/2008 |
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| good one |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
10/12/2008 |
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| Spoken like the true romantic that you are. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
10/12/2008 |
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Reverently encapsulating and so full of desire.....
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by Sandie May Angel-Joyce |
10/12/2008 |
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Thy poem is great!!!
Sandie Angel :o) |
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