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Books
• A Work in Progress - Come the Realms of Winter

• The Dragon and The Rose - Part 2: The Confrontation

• The Dragon and The Rose - Part 1: The Turning Point


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• The Papyrus of Queen Nitocris

• Childhood Shadows


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• What are fans saying about The Dragon and The Rose Fantasy Series


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• Oh! I See.

• Miss You

• Captured

• I Awake

• Red Moon

• so easy

• Everyday

• The Battle Fierce

• New Title - A spining world

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so easy
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A puzzle
by Diane C Hundertmark
Saturday, August 31, 2002


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A puzzle
by Diane C. Hundertmark
copyright 2002


Version 1
A desert owl soars in flight
A shadow crossed moon doth show
Lonely deaths at namless hands
Bodies blown to dust so dry

Shadows cast by the light
Water is there to feed the soul
A solitary tree deep in sands
Neath the stars in a southern sky

Shows the way in the night
Gives the life truth be told
Cradles treasures in magic bands
Sweet Elven scion there doth hide

Version 2

A desert owl soars in flight
Shadows cast by the light
Shows the way in the night

A shadow crossed moon doth show
Water is there to feed the soul
Gives the life truth be told

Lonely deaths at nameless hands
A solitary tree deep in sands
Cradles treasures in magic bands

Bodies blown to dust so dry
Neath the stars in a southern sky
Sweet Elven scion there doth hide



This was written as a puzzle for a role playing game. It was orginally planned to be lines written on scraps of parchment that were to be found and pieced together to give clues for a quest. Here are two ways these 12 lines could fit together. Dee

The Dragon and The Rose


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Reviewed by E. P. Ned Burke 6/26/2007
Clever poem in graphic words. Congrats! Ned
Reviewed by Peter Benson 4/18/2003
Hope the bastard finds his/her Dad
Difficult to comment out of context, but rouses interest even alone.
Reviewed by Nickolaus Pacione 10/20/2002
impressive piece dee. There are some new ones on mine as well each one more sinister than the last.
Reviewed by Masarat Daud (Reader) 8/31/2002
Enjoyed this a lot!







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