The Silliest poem Ever!
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Donni-Jay De-Ville
Tuesday, November 18, 2003
Rated "G" by the Author.
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I wrote this as I do all my poems, by scribbling, as I like to see the ink flowing onto the paper.
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The wind was whistling,
The dog was howling,
The rain was falling,
Something is calling.
The moon is peeping,
Crawlies are creeping,
Trees are rustling,
Someone is hustling:
At the end of the garden behind the barn door!
The maid's with the butler,
They both got a fright.
Well, haven't you heard of bumps in the night?
Copyright ©2004 Donni-Jay De-Ville
All rights reserved and may not be
reproduced in any way without permission from the author
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| Reviewed by Bonita Quesinberry, R.C. |
11/20/2003 |
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| Wonderful poem, Donni, clearly reflecting things that go "bump in the night!" Well written. Visit my Den sometime. ~~Bonnie Q |
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| Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader) |
11/19/2003 |
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Not silly at all, a truly wonderful rhyming piece!
LOL...I love that sliding in ending!
~Nikki~ |
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| Reviewed by Teresa Vivienne (Reader) |
11/19/2003 |
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| It's not a silly poem. It rhymes nicely, and i like the bit at the end. When I have kids I might tell them this one! |
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| Reviewed by Julie Donner Andersen |
11/18/2003 |
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LOL! Caught in the act! Cute, humourous poem, Donni!
Jules :) |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
11/18/2003 |
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| Lovely Donni-Jay |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
11/18/2003 |
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| kewl! :D (((HUGS))) and love, your texas friend, karen lynn. :D |
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| Reviewed by Paul Berube |
11/18/2003 |
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| Donni-Jay, Ya gotta watch out for them bumps in the night.(lol) |
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| Reviewed by Lady Peg |
11/18/2003 |
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| Loved the ending .. |
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