You Don't Need Him, (Anymore.) (poem) by Donni De-Ville on AuthorsDen

Reeve is about to come full circle, he wants more out of life, but some times getting what you want carries a heavy price...

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You Don't Need Him, (Anymore.) by Donni De-Ville Thursday, November 20, 2003 Rated "G" by the Author. Share Print Save Become a Fan Another true story, but this is sung with Medieval music. The tune was just in my head and I had to write it, though I've don't remember ever listening to any, except in old historical things on television.
He won me over, with words of sweet love; It seemed he came straight from Heaven above. He made me feel like a queen; he was the King. His talk was cheap; he didn't mean a thing. Now that I'm hooked, I just sit and wait for him. He says he'll be there, but it's only a whim. Seemed so sincere, that I made myself believe; He was everything, that I'd ever need. I won't believe him anymore. Take that advice, show him the door! He's not the one I thought he was. I don't need him, no I won't need him. Anymore. He held me close and his kiss is was like a dream. I loved him so much that I told him how I feel. He said he felt the same, I meant more than anything. He'd ever known, but he don't mean a thing. I don't need him, no I won't need him, Any more. Copyright �1988 Donni-Jay De-Ville All rights reserved and may not be reproduced in any way without permission from the author

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Reviewed by Claywoman	11/23/2003

Okay Donni, write this as a poem, not a song. The breaks keep you from seeing how the words flow, and I think they flow nicely! When you write songs, yes, you put in the breaks with the notes, but in poetry, you need an even flow or as I do, write so you either slow down the reader, or speed them up if its needs that. You have a good start here and I'd like to hear the music that accompanies this poem.