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| Reviewed by Reginald Birch |
6/30/2004 |
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Love of your beloved ocean beautifully put to words.
Reg. |
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| Reviewed by Marco Landi |
6/26/2004 |
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I can read this work over and over and see....
"Each wave coming from a far, exotic land where another pair of feet dig toes into the sand"
Brava
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| Reviewed by Ian Thorpe |
6/24/2004 |
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There is something spiritually significan about the meeting of land and water. You capture it well here.
And isn't it a delicious feeling when the receding waves dig the sand from under your feet?
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| Reviewed by ya mama (Reader) |
6/16/2004 |
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| a vivid write. |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
6/12/2004 |
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| The sea is a wonder and you say it so well here, Rose. Thank you for this offering. Love and peace. Regis |
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| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
6/11/2004 |
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Hi Rose,
This is beautiful and thought-provoking, I like this a lot.
May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o) |
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| Reviewed by E. Richardson |
6/11/2004 |
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| a beautiful piece of nature! your images in this are first class! Splendid job, Rose. |
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| Reviewed by Abe Rossi |
6/9/2004 |
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| what is good for the toes....is good for the soul....Peace Abel |
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| Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader) |
6/6/2004 |
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| Rose, this is poem is so image filled. I can almost feel the water on my feet, the sand between my toes, the smell of the ocean...excellently written...Fletcher B |
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| Reviewed by Jane Rodway |
6/6/2004 |
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| This reminds me of a buddhist practice of mindful walking, which is what I do to get in touch. This has a calming feeling. |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) |
6/6/2004 |
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Great thoughts Rose, salt water is in every English mans blood.. bar mine.
Nice one..... |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
6/6/2004 |
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Wonderfully good poem, Rose. And many of us feel something wondrous 'at water's edge.'
Since life started in the water, and our evolutionary predecessors first crawled onto land, from water, perhaps there is a special bond there - both ancient and sacred. |
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| Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero |
6/6/2004 |
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This poem, "Water's Edge", is more than the narrator's experience. Its universal voice, allowed the reader to make it his/her experience. It is all that I've ever envisioned the ocean to be. Your words made me see, feel, and smell the ocean as I've so many times experienced. This is very good writing, Rose.
Carmen :-) |
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| Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader) |
6/6/2004 |
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| MAGICAL work, ROSE...both the poem and pic! |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
6/6/2004 |
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| Deep and beautifully written! |
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| Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson |
6/5/2004 |
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Beautiful write Rose, I felt as if I were there. Fantastic picture to compliment this write. I take at least six rolls of film everytime I visit the sea. The setting for this write was perfect...Oh How I Love The Sea! For it is there that I can taste eternity.
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| Reviewed by Regina Pounds |
6/5/2004 |
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Vivid writing...yes, I love the ocean, too, and you bring it to life here.
Gina |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
6/5/2004 |
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A beautiful write ....Rose
love the ocean my self
always been surrounded by water
loved this write
excellent
William |
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| Reviewed by John Banasiewicz Jr |
6/5/2004 |
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Nice pic of the sunset and ocean. Goes perfect with write here. Relaxing and a place to search and find yourself is the ocean. Ankle high is my max but you put me right at the edge here and had me soul searching also after the read.
Very well done Rose
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
6/5/2004 |
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Hey, watch yourself, Rose, that ocean is mine as well...unless it is the Pacific, then you can have it...it is definitely different than my ocean as mine has yet to get warm and for sure there are no pelicans as far north as NJ, I wish, but...?
You have posted here a gem, a diamond and not in the rough, as any and all ocean scenes are ingrained in us all for all of time, no need to be there, just to dream and remember and we can be washed clean of all our pain...this poem has done this not only for you, but for the rest of us and for that we all thank you immensely...Peace thru Ocean Knowledge...Ed & Rufuz |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
6/5/2004 |
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Rose this is a masterpiece! Every word start to finish is
magical! The ocean is my favorite place and you have made
it even more beautiful!Thank you for such a gem! |
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| Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger |
6/5/2004 |
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| Greetings Poet Rose Limongi. This is timeless treasure You have penned, and have shared it with us!!!… Nothing better than being at “Water’s Edge!!!”… To help one find the true meaning of it all. There is some really GREAT Poetry being pumped out tonight!!!… Thank You for sharing Your Talent and Poetry, Poet!!! |
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| Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) |
6/5/2004 |
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| Stunning poetry and visuals masterful poem. |
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