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Reclaiming My Birth
by Rose Limongi
Tuesday, August 10, 2004
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My first experience at a naturist beach. Most assuredly the first of many. The graphic I am using is THE beach referred to in the poem.

Speak to me oh Mother of mine

Whisper my name in the waves

Allow me to come home

To begin again intentionally

Your labor of love surrounds me

This journey of reclamation

Painless as I shed the last

Bastion of societal restraint

To fully surrender myself

As you guide and nurture my spirit

In the flight of the bird overhead

I am reminded that in life we

Soar above life’s trials

As the turtle crawls from land to sea

I am reminded that we are grounded to each other

In the waves that kiss my body

I am reminded that passion comes and goes

In the pregnant white clouds far off in the distance

I am reminded that even as we are filled with hope

And awe, we are to be mindful to pause and give thanks

In the sand that peppers my skin and under girds me

I am reminded that no one-grain of sand makes a beach

Just as no one human makes humanity

As I watch people in pursuit of the same re-birth

I rejoice as their childhood returns to them

Playful and free once again

!Libertad Mother, Libertad!

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Reviewed by Handsum Hart	8/16/2004

Outstanding !!!!!!!!!!! I really like this. More please.




Reviewed by Regis Auffray	8/14/2004

Dear Rose. This is a beautiful creation and I thank you for sharing it with us. My love and peace to you always. Regis




Reviewed by Henry Lefevre	8/12/2004

My childhood has returned to me so many times that I wonder if I ever lost it.




Reviewed by Franz Kessler	8/12/2004

Vivid outcry for a life close to its essence... Thank you for your passion and vision. Franz




Reviewed by Cynth'ya cynthyaspeaks@gmail.com	8/11/2004

Inspiration from what must have been an amazing connection with the sand and sea. Good comparisons and metaphors Rose, VERY good comparisons. blessin's cynth'ya lewis reed




Reviewed by John Banasiewicz Jr	8/11/2004

Rose, First I know your love of the ocean and also I know this was something here you had given much serious thought and I am glad you took your first step and from your write here it was everything you had hoped for as an experience of a rebirth. Excellent words to describe how you felt on this first step here. Hope the rebirth continues to grow within you. Tommy ~~~&&&***




Reviewed by Tinka Boukes	8/11/2004

Beautiful write Rose!! Love Tinka




Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero	8/11/2004

Libertad! Ah... Si! "Reclaiming My Birth" left me feeling like there's much yet unexplored inside me -- what a challenge to give into it. Thanks Rose. smile Carmen :-)




Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz	8/11/2004

Wow! This is an experience extraordinaire, expressed in the same manner.




Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot	8/11/2004

Yes it is indeed one of life's most liberating pastimes, to lie in the sun, as you were the day you were born, but here with plenty of sunscreen on. Excellente, and most invigorating to the mind. Yes Andy it does LOL. Love ~Contesse~




Reviewed by Kate Clifford	8/10/2004

Profound and beautiful write!




Reviewed by Peter Paton	8/10/2004

Truly beautiful and exquisite Rose Another gem from your quill my friend .... Love Peter




Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)	8/10/2004

BEAUTIFUl just so Beautiful Rose!!!




Reviewed by E T Waldron	8/10/2004

This is superb Rose, you captured the imagery wonderfully!




Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader)	8/10/2004

Rose, great el-natural poem...I can definately relate to this one, although I think I would look quite obvious strutting my naked bod along the beaches in Hong Kong...I love the verse where you write In the sand that peppers my skin and under girds me I am reminded that no one-grain of sand makes a beach Enjoyed...Fletcher B




Reviewed by jude forese	8/10/2004

know where you're coming from ... outstanding imagery!




Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger	8/10/2004

Rose, this is an exceptionally well-crafted composition, which blends all the NATURAL beauty of Mother Nature and her offspring’s. Just make sure you use plenty of sun tan lotion, better yet, make sure you take someone special with you, and allow them to apply a generous amount all over… lol. It really will help keep you from frying like a lobster my friend… lol. And besides it feels so refreshing too! Thanks for sharing the vivid imagery… lol. Okay, I’ll stop. I see you blushing… lol. Outstanding work, Poet! Or would that be out side standing… lol! Peace Rose! P.S. If you do take any pictures of the seagulls, please keep them for prosperity…lol.




Reviewed by Mr. Ed	8/10/2004

Sounds Very Liberating!




Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson	8/10/2004

To each their own. Be free as you can be.. excellent write.....




Reviewed by Ed Matlack	8/10/2004

Actually I disagree with Andy, hope you don't post the snaps as most I have seen on those beaches are as old as the hills, not to say that I am talking about you, but, well, uh, er, let me just end this review here before I lost what few teeth I have left...Peace thru Nudity, Ed & rufuz




Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)	8/10/2004

Hope you post the snaps. Does sand ("Andy no") So feeling liberated and carefree, yes passion on a birthday suit beach would be of concern... fun fun fun, in the sun sun sun..

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