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| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
6/27/2004 |
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A wonderful tribute to your father. What a lovely moment captured in the picture. Good write indeed.
~ May Lu a.k.a. Sandie May Angel ~ |
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| Reviewed by ya mama (Reader) |
6/25/2004 |
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| nice. yay! |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) |
6/24/2004 |
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Enchanting read.
Think all father get stuck in a time warp, seeing their children, still as kids.. |
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| Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain |
6/23/2004 |
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| A beautiful tribute uniquely and wonderfully crafted, Andrea! |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
6/23/2004 |
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| Lovely tribute, Andrea. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace. Regis |
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| Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope) |
6/23/2004 |
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| a very clever write. Thanks for sharing |
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| Reviewed by Peter Oszmann |
6/22/2004 |
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To my “Pearl”
Wow! What can an oyster say to a pearl?
You’re my little girl, my sweet little girl.
But as the girl into fair woman grew,
Remember always to thyself be true.
Be a free spirit without any chain,
Although a woman, sweet girl to remain,
Who is cute, sweet, clever, cheeky and smart,
Forever to reside inside my heart;
A special place there ever to enjoy…
...My sweet little girl my pride and true joy…
Thank you for being my daughter!
Lots of love from your old Pops…
Also thanks for your comments under my last posting… you cheeky little…
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
6/22/2004 |
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Lol!!
If I am daddy’s little girl
And you say I’m your little pearl
Does that make you an oyster?
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
6/22/2004 |
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| LOL loved the ending of such a delightful write. |
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| Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero |
6/22/2004 |
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"Does that make you an oyster?" < Precious! Lovely poem, Andrea. Just lovely. What fondness it reflects.
Carmen :-)
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| Reviewed by Andrea Da Costa (Reader) |
6/22/2004 |
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Gorgeous Andrea and a wonderful tribute to your father!
I love the photo....you were sooooo cute :-)
Andrea |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
6/22/2004 |
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Lovely Ode to your Dad, and a very loving picture, Andrea.
Hope you always remain Daddy's Little Girl. |
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| Reviewed by April Smith |
6/22/2004 |
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| Very sweet...it made me teary-eyed thinking of my own Daddy! I miss him! Good job...April |
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| Reviewed by George MacLean Akurunwa |
6/22/2004 |
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| Great family photo and great lines. Thanks. |
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| Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader) |
6/22/2004 |
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| This is well written, Andra...That picture is really SWEET! |
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| Reviewed by Lori Moore |
6/22/2004 |
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| Sweet write. Cute, clever ending. Enjoyed. |
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| Reviewed by Zenith Elliott |
6/22/2004 |
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| Beautiful sentiments, excellent tribute to your Dad...~Z~ |
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| Reviewed by Magnus Rater (Reader) |
6/22/2004 |
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| Yes!!! If only all us who are Dad could earn such super sentiments! I am sure the oyster will always give security to the pearl! Well done, Andrea! Your thoughts are true gems. |
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