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Just a Thought
by andrea hale
Monday, April 04, 2005
Rated "G" by the Author.

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Just a Thought

Once in the bath

Twice in the rain

This commuting lark

Will never change

London Bridge or Charing Cross

Doesn’t matter which

I’m totally lost

Yesterday a holiday

I had my sanity

Back to routine

Back to insanity

London Bridge or Charing Cross

Don’t matter which

This commuting larks

Given me a nervous twitch

Same people, same places

Same look, same faces

Spare a cell for the poor commuter

Straight jacket, purple pills and a new computer

For everything’s computerised

Look at him, he’s got digital eyes

And him, he’s got the Times

A crossword and he gets the signs

No FT, no comment

No train, an advent

I’m laughing it off in my padded cell

This commuting lark can go to hell

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Reviewed by Regis Auffray	4/13/2005

You certainly get the emotions and the meaning across in these verses, Andrea. Love and peace to you. Regis




Reviewed by Robert Sheridan	4/5/2005

Andrea, Versed, rhymed, and imaged to eye-opening perfection ... sensational!! Blessings, Robert




Reviewed by Handsum Hart	4/4/2005

Sounds like quite an experience My commute is short and fast, quess I'm lucky A cute write.




Reviewed by D May (Reader)	4/4/2005

Gotta love and hate routine. Sometimes it drives me crazy, others times its comforting. Nicely written.




Reviewed by Mr. Ed	4/4/2005

I, too, began hating that humdrum boring routine commute - they can truly drive one crazy.




Reviewed by A PAX	4/4/2005

LOL I used to commute to uptown Manhattan.......... no cells back then or lap tops......... just fighting for a seat! good poem Andrea.........and funny!




Reviewed by E T Waldron	4/4/2005

You are writing with a new spark Andrea! Superb poem! Good to see you!;-)Hope and pray all is well! Love, Eileen




Reviewed by Tinka Boukes	4/4/2005

I enjoyed the "Underground" train rides...I has such a laff watching everyone...ver amusing!! Love Tinka

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