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| Reviewed by Joanna Leone |
8/26/2008 |
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| I know that everyone interprets poetry differently. To me, this poem may seem dark, but it actually full of hope. You make me feel like I want to get into the poem and walk down the dark hallway with you, as you provoke emotion within me with your words. However, the sign of hope in this poem, is shown in your words, "but my best days are the days when I see the vision of higher realms and listen to the seashells of beauty..." This shows that no matter how much darkness and how much sorrow we feel, we always can and will find something beautiful in each day. We all have our "seashells" or sights and sounds which may cause our darkness to disappear. There is always light even on our darkest hours. You truly are talented, and I am tracking your work. It is obvious that you are talented, deep, and know how to touch the soul. |
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| Reviewed by alejapoet@aol.com Bennett |
12/15/2005 |
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| Another excellent and creative write written by your strong and pur mind. |
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| Reviewed by Regina Pounds |
2/12/2005 |
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Ron, your knowledge of the dark, the dreary, the monotone makes your flashes of warmth and strength all the more powerful. Your strong descriptions never fail to evoke the picture you have in mind.
Gina |
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| Reviewed by Leysa Lowery |
12/2/2004 |
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| So lovely! |
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| Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader) |
12/1/2004 |
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So Beautiful and I really love the way you write things like where wind wails against ruined walls. All the way through this. Really nice and inspiring. Thank You
God Bless you and your family.
Warmest and Happiest holidays and all days.
Tracey |
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| Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader) |
11/29/2004 |
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there are those times
i dwell in halls of sorrow
where wind wails
against the ruined walls
the cracks, the lingering ache
of joy gone awry <------------ Sheer beauty...
Most impressive writing Ron.....
ty, Dani
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| Reviewed by Robert Montesino |
11/29/2004 |
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| A heart felt write with hope expressed gracefully, honestly & without apology. |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
11/29/2004 |
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Beautiful poetry you penned Ronald!!
Love Tinka |
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