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Crime Scene
by George M Jackson

Tuesday, March 01, 2005
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Okay, this is from something that happened a few years ago and I've let it go for the most part, but sometimes I take it back...hate that lol.

Hollowed out, crime scene where my


Heart used to be, cut up and left for


Dead by a woman in a mask, true face


Leering underneath, rotted with bad


Intentions, clever M.O. setting me up


With false promises, broken lies her


Weapon of choice, slashing out from


Behind with deadly precision, master


Of evasive answers to specific questions


As she cut and cut and cut, bleeding out


The one I was, old scars that still fester


In my dreams, that hollowed out place


Where my heart still twitches…


 


Memories like chalk outlines.


 


 


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“Crime Scene”


 


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Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya 3/2/2005
Perfecto!!! BHUWAN!!!
Reviewed by Dave Harm 3/1/2005
Wow, intense!!! Its amazing how the head knows, long before the heart will agree, that some relationships were never meant to be...
Reviewed by Katy Walsvik 3/1/2005
"Memories like chalk outlines."

George, that line collapsed me, entirely. 4 words with the impact and the imagination to weave all sorts of images. It's both poetic and real. We poets love to be able to relate to another's words... I'd say this boldly-written piece will be a 'face-to-face' encounter for many... but it's your unique voice, here, that makes reading it a poetic pleasure. katy xox.

Reviewed by Kate Burnside 3/1/2005
This hurts. Like a cardboard cut-out left steam-rollered. The old Tom and Jerry flat-iron trick. Sadly, it takes more than Fred Quimby to make the real man or woman pop back up again, but with patience, self-respect and the nurture of loving friends and family, the colours can be restored and the person rebuilt. The body can be restored when broken, but a broken spirit is tragic. I hope the splinted wings will be healed to fly. Tellin it like it is, you are master of the "from the gut" writes, George. Bless you and thank you for these surgical portrayals that go deep. LOL Kate xx
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 3/1/2005
Scary and serious poetry George!!

Well written my friend!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Sue Hess 3/1/2005
call CSI Indiana, its murder for sure...damned what some people can do with the weapons at hand...you wrote of it beautifully
Reviewed by E T Waldron 3/1/2005
Oh yes crime scene is a good analogy for this one George!When people mess with our minds and hearts it is a crime!
A normal relationship where two are attracted, but it comes apart is one story. We can get over that. The ones where lies and promises, taking advantage of our good faith,
misrepresenting the truth of their intentions,should be classified a crime!

Well done!

eileen

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