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Finding Our Horizon
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jeanne rene watson
Thursday, August 26, 2004
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(revision 2.07)
Finding Our Horizon
Can I stand beside the bushman, humble the lineage to the magnificence of the hunter’s will? Join him, as eye upon track, nostril flared to the scent, I become the heartbeat of my prey.
Can you take me back to the grace of the gatherer? To find me falling in homage on beds of grain, and dancing triumph in pools of elixir.
Can I hold the artistry of the storyteller, and draw upon rock in faithful colors, to paint history with strokes of integrity? I would, my vision be simplified to find each solid canvas holds the secret to a boundless journey.
How can I be inspired to create without pestilence?
Can we wipe our face clean of arrogance? Look upon the sky without ownership . . . Take a quantum leap backwards, falling into our steps once traveled in unison.
Let me be immersed in my birth waters.
Can I speak with my brother in melodious tongue and clicks of memory washed over the continents? Let me carry my home on my back. Have me offer, reverence devotion for all horizons that lay beyond time. Show me how to consecrate the sand that lies beneath my feet at any season.
Let me be immersed . . .
purged, in the heat of the primordial fire.
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Finding Our Horizon
Can I stand beside the bushmen, humble this lineage to the magnificence of the hunter’s will? Join them, as eye upon track, nostril flared to the scent, I become the heartbeat of my prey.
Can you take me back to the grace of the gatherer? To find me falling in homage on beds of grain, and dancing triumph in pools of elixir.
Can I hold the artistry of the storytellers, and draw upon rock in faithful colors, to paint my history with strokes of integrity? I would, my vision be simplified to find each solid canvas holds the secret to a boundless journey.
How can I be inspired to create without pestilence?
Can we wipe our face clean of arrogance? Look upon the sky without ownership . . . Take a quantum leap backwards, falling into our steps once traveled in unison.
Let me be immersed in my birth water.
Can I speak with my brother in melodious tongue and clicks of memory washed over the continents ? Now let me take my home on my back. Have me offer, my reverence my devotion for all horizons that lay before me. Show me how to consecrate the sand that lies beneath my feet at any season.
Let me be immersed . . .
Wash me, in the heat of the primordial fire.
jeanne rené 8/04
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| Reviewed by Lois Christensen |
6/16/2008 |
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| Rock of Ages, this is just what the poem broght to me. How wonderful it would be if all could get along together, support each other, stop lying to one another and give to those in need when we have more than enough etc. Stop being stingy and walk in the sand and think what you can do to help others. |
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| Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger |
9/30/2004 |
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| Poet, in order for one to find the strength needed for rediscovering the tranquility necessary to survive the onslaught of mankind’s heinous treatment towards each other, one must often reach deep inside. I enjoyed the read. |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
8/26/2004 |
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| Love this one! Fantastic write. |
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| Reviewed by writerdawn |
8/26/2004 |
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| Whew... those last two lines cool and sear and cleanse again. Really enjoyed this. You have quite a talent for knitting strong images together like a masterfully woven basket filled with the gift of wisdom. Wonderful work, Dawn |
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