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The poem praises the beauty of the early dawn color of sky.
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Misty dawn, lilac sky,
Weary spirits look up high.
Early morn, brand new day,
Rising sunlight brightens our way.
Misty dawn, lilac sky,
Each day your beauty maginified.
All the world is in its prime,
Each horizon yields a new springtime.
Misty dawn, lilac sky,
Puffy white clouds float on by.
Across the heavens eagles soar,
While far below the oceans roar.
Misty dawn, lilac sky,
All the earth must comply.
Amber light, coming sunshine,
Time to sing praises to the Divine.
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| Reviewed by Cryssa C |
10/8/2010 |
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Very pretty... I too see lilac in the sky and it signals to me that dreams are not forgotten.
Cryssa |
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| Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper |
7/8/2010 |
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| You've described the early morning Sunrise beautifully. "Mist and lilac and puffy white clouds" sets a nice image. |
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| Reviewed by Joy Marsh |
4/20/2009 |
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Beautiful and serene poem.
Joy |
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| Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G |
4/11/2009 |
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LOVE the way Misty dawn, Lilac Sky is repeated in Unison
and more imagery follows along Gil!
Great flow of a grateful "DAY and View" Poem!
Blessed Indeed!
and us too, for this Blessed Poem we get to read!
WRITE ON!
Warmest Blessings, Love and Peace, Warrior Purple Lady SHEExooo |
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| Reviewed by John Domino |
2/4/2009 |
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Nice Gil,
Praise the LORD!
He paints the sky!!
Amen |
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| Reviewed by Chris Wright |
11/11/2008 |
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| Whew I could feel this and it was almost as if I was in the movie City of Angels when they went to the beach just to see the sunrise and her the songs of its warmth. Very Magnificent! |
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| Reviewed by 000 000 |
11/10/2008 |
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| Serene! |
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| Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle |
11/9/2008 |
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A beautiful poem you have written
Edwin |
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| Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson |
5/30/2008 |
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| Beautiful, your words have painted a picture of dawn in all its majesty......M |
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| Reviewed by Crystal Silver Angel (Reader) |
3/19/2006 |
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Loved all lines such as ~ Misty dawn, lilac sky,
Puffy white clouds float on by.
Across the heavens eagles soar,
While far below the oceans roar.
love joanne
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| Reviewed by sarah playle |
12/17/2005 |
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| Beautifully expressed. |
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| Reviewed by Jane Rodway |
10/8/2005 |
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| LOVED this, felt like I was there. |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) |
9/30/2005 |
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OOOO, same wavelength.
Masterful poetry... |
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