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| Reviewed by Jon Willey |
8/11/2009 |
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| thrust in the midst of deep exploration of the who,what,when where, how and why of mankind -- compelling write done masterfully Kate -- even though not the vaunted Haibun you sought -- form be damned, this is some of the good work -- peace and love my friend -- Jon Michael |
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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
8/7/2009 |
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So visual. Effective imagery! Hugs,
Sheila |
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| Reviewed by Dale Clark |
8/4/2009 |
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| So unique and visual, Kate... love it! Haibun, eh? Cool, I'll try it! |
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| Reviewed by Linda Settles |
8/3/2009 |
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| "by his source is each man known--" is so true, Kate. Whatever we take into our body, mind, and soul will nourish life--or death, "slaughter or sweetness." |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
8/3/2009 |
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..my, what a whirlwind of emotions here....original and most powerful indeed :)
Love,
Christine |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge |
8/3/2009 |
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| You have given me thoughts to ponder Kate, images to vision and great poetry to appreciate. |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
8/3/2009 |
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Who cares if it's a haibun or not, this is pure, spectacular Kate! Well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace |
8/3/2009 |
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| Excellent writing as always ...stay safe and well sweet lady...Hugss |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
8/3/2009 |
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From the Albion of daggers in the night drawing blood here comes a poem that has a whiff of Transylvania's Vlad Tepes from a delicate hand that will never give us a rose full of thorns.
Georg
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| Reviewed by Dawn Wilson |
8/3/2009 |
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| Intense, powerful...beautiful work, Kate! |
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| Reviewed by kenny baez |
8/3/2009 |
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Hmm, deep water here, Kate.
I'm reading Norman Mailer's Castle in the Forest about the family history of the Hitler family; apparently, young Adolf was a client of the devil. It does seem sometimes that angels and demons are battling it out here on the Good Earth.
angelic Ken
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| Reviewed by Paul Judges |
8/2/2009 |
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| Powerfully expressed, Kate |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
8/2/2009 |
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High impact poetry whatever the style! Gotta love it!;-)
ET
(breathes instead of breathing for 5;-) |
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| Reviewed by Lori Moore |
8/2/2009 |
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| Wonderful poetry, Kate. As always, a pleasure. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
8/2/2009 |
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| well-correct or not-i like it! |
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| Reviewed by Dallas D'Angelo-Gary |
8/2/2009 |
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| Powerful and deep, Kate. I love the finish on this. |
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| Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis |
8/2/2009 |
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| "...by his source is each man known..." is a wonderful line that fits beautifully into this viscerally-felt piece. The title is perfect. And, I've always loved the word "envisage." |
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| Reviewed by Gene Williamson |
8/2/2009 |
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Kate, though this is not a haibun, who cares? It's marvelous
poetry. I really love these lines:
Immortals stand tall, faces upturned,
and sip from bills of humming birds,
wings of heaven fanning their face.
Beautiful! Yours in envy, -gene. |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
8/2/2009 |
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Kate,
This pushes boundaries with its rich thought and expression and has me thinking of the human and immortal conditions we are heir to. And the ending, the 'no way to read the truth in the countenance' has a deep Shakespearean ring to it.
John |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
8/2/2009 |
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Powerful piece, Kate, as only you can do; excellent, m'dear! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :) |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
8/2/2009 |
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Ouch...this is intense and rings with a deep throaty rumble of a poet's potential. Kate your words, no matter what form you take are always welcome and listened to with mind and heart...this one is no exception.
hugs
Pops
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