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| Reviewed by SOULFUL SHEE G. Pulsing In Passionate Purple PassionS |
8/26/2009 |
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WOW! Truly Expressive over mind, body and soul Kate!
I like your creative expressiveness and the flow, and the 3rd verse floored me
WRITE ON!
Blessings and Peace, Purple_Passions,SHEExooo |
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| Reviewed by Cryssa C |
8/22/2009 |
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The last stanza is mesmerizing...
Cryssa :~) |
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| Reviewed by Debashish Haar |
8/20/2009 |
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| Another brilliant poem, both in ideation (if that is the right word) and flow. You have given life to the shadow! |
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| Reviewed by Jon Willey |
8/15/2009 |
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| your metaphor unwinds gently like a ball of yarn in the hands of a seasoned seamstress -- you waxed this one with precision Kate -- peace and love my friend -- Jon Michael |
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| Reviewed by Sir Leonardo |
8/13/2009 |
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| nice images you create |
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| Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen |
8/8/2009 |
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ah, to lengthen one's grasp...
love this spirited write, kate. well done!
cg |
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| Reviewed by The Bear Paw |
8/7/2009 |
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Hi Kate, what a wonder you are with words and thoughts... so intellectual.... this speaks for the shadow... thank you for sharing this....
In Spirit,
Bear |
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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
8/7/2009 |
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Kate,
You capture that saying about opposites completing one another. There are so many things we'd never be exposed to without that perfect someone to show us and vice versa. Love your word choices in this one. Hugs,
Sheila |
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| Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury |
8/6/2009 |
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| I like this, it creates images of Peter Pan; and all of the wonders that still abound in our world! |
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| Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg |
8/6/2009 |
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love that middle bit..."minimised....fire blazing overhead"
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
8/6/2009 |
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This is just flat out brilliant, and a joy to read!,Kate
ET |
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| Reviewed by richard cederberg |
8/6/2009 |
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A remarkable poetic moment here KB.
The imagery and message flows
like hot lyrical wax.
rlc |
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| Reviewed by Gene Williamson |
8/6/2009 |
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Kate, you emerge from the shadows with lines I read
and reread in unabashed delight and envy, as you wax
lyrically...
like a softly sloughing skin,
completing my incompleteness.
-gene.
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| Reviewed by Carole Mathys |
8/6/2009 |
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This is fabulous Kate...your writing always delights me.
Carole~ |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
8/5/2009 |
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shadows are transparent until someone fills them ...
waxed lyrical empirical ... |
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| Reviewed by Michelle Mead |
8/5/2009 |
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| As always, more brilliant work. |
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| Reviewed by Axilea Uzumcuoglu |
8/5/2009 |
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Opposites attract and a shadow is reassuring, you just have to accept that it's there. To be complete, it sounds so good, it sounds so true and yet, I wonder if I really understand what it means "to be complete". Sorry, these are just random thoughts after reading your inspiring piece of writing.
I love those "p" sounds in the first stanza... Lovely imagery of contrasts. :)
Axilea |
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| Reviewed by Walt Hardester |
8/5/2009 |
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So very lyrically metaphorical in a completly magical way.
Walt |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
8/5/2009 |
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To write like this - sigh. Beautiful, Kate, as always -
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge |
8/5/2009 |
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| Kate,I don't know how you do this, these metaphors that are heavenly glorious but I never tire of reading your work and feeling the intellect and energy behind them. This poem is so unique and captivates the mind and emotions with new thoughts about shadows. |
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| Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle |
8/5/2009 |
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Great poem,I enjoy reading it,take care
EDWIN |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
8/5/2009 |
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You in front of a candle, me there, not going away no matter how you shake things, I will be there even after you blow off the flame.
Your Shadow
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| Reviewed by Rose Rideout |
8/5/2009 |
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No way to escape your shadow Kate. Thank you for sharing a great write.
Newfie Hugs, Rose |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
8/5/2009 |
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| The Shadow knows you've penned a gem here. |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Wilson |
8/4/2009 |
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| Clever and beautifully done, Kate. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
8/4/2009 |
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| This is great! One of the best shadow poems i have read! |
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| Reviewed by Lori Moore |
8/4/2009 |
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| Now I have to go think... Great write, Kate. |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
8/4/2009 |
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like the sound and rythem of this one sweet Kate,, how you unwind it with such a personal feeling with love permeating the whole story.
hugs
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
8/4/2009 |
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Kate,
Not just clever but deep and consummate writing, expert and with the ease of mastery.
John |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
8/4/2009 |
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...hand in hand with our shadow...a part of whom we are..love this captivating piece of work!
love,Christine |
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| Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks |
8/4/2009 |
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How we have been fascinated by our shadows...from early tumbles, to daring jumps, to vainly checking our "shapes". But you have brought the shadow to its apex with this beautiful, lyrical form, dear Kate. Tip o' the cap, girl!!
Blessings and Love - Micke
(and a chocolate...or two :o) |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
8/4/2009 |
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| You light up the dark corners with the light from your poetry |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
8/4/2009 |
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Kate, you ROCK!! AWESOME write; brava!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D |
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| Reviewed by Dale Clark |
8/4/2009 |
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| masterful writing, Kate, so very, very good! |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
8/4/2009 |
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| EXCELLENT...YOUR IMAGERY IS ABSOLUTELY TERRIFIC. ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING AND GOD BLESS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS |
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| Reviewed by Dallas D'Angelo-Gary |
8/4/2009 |
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| Beautifully done, Kate. Isn't it amazing how much a shadow changes shape, but it never leaves you, even in the faintest light. Love it! |
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