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| Reviewed by David Hightower |
10/19/2009 |
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Kate - This has a medieval sound to me. The vivid imagery and metaphors
also have that feel. All leading to the contrast of,
It’s I who own their heat,
I who supplement her lack,
Enjoyed as always. - David
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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
10/15/2009 |
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The third verse blew me away, Kate. That's my favorite part, but I also really liked your metaphors in the last few verses. Wonderful poetry. Hugs,
Sheila |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Price |
10/15/2009 |
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| The subtle contrasts and conflicts weave a story and puzzle. But what a gem one finds amongst. Liz |
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| Reviewed by Dallas D'Angelo-Gary |
10/15/2009 |
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| This is wonderful, Kate. I really love the closure. |
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| Reviewed by Gene Williamson |
10/15/2009 |
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| Ms Duffy, make room for Kate. I love the sound of this. -gene. |
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| Reviewed by Inspire Hope |
10/14/2009 |
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Excellent write Kate, I found these profound words
very interesting! Thank for sharing and for caring.
Much love
Always!! |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Diamond |
10/13/2009 |
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I think I allude to what Cryssa says below. She has lifted the thoughts right out of my subconscious..:)
' Never cast pearls before a swine '. How true is that Kate
Take care
Jerry |
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| Reviewed by Dale Clark |
10/13/2009 |
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| a 'Pearl' of a write, Kate... beautiful |
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| Reviewed by Nordette Adams |
10/12/2009 |
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Well, paying attention to the muse's whispered phrase certainly paid off for you. Told a story. :-)
BTW, I'm no longer in the NJ/New York area. I moved back to New Orleans two years ago. |
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| Reviewed by Charlie |
10/12/2009 |
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This immediately makes me think of "the other woman"-- how he woos the one who warms him, while married to the codfish with the thick neck and heart-- such a waste of pearly wonders cast from swine to hands who would appreciate them.
My favorite lines: "my Mistress’s pearls she bids me warm" and "his gift free-given, soft-ploughed"... that farming term very much appeals to me. It conjures up all sorts of warm and fertile feelings.
But most of all, I love this for the lyrical quality it has. It sounds like a nursery song, like "Sing a Song of Six Pence" . It has a sense about it that could mean different things for everyone, as seen from the comments below.
(and I love how lines cling to your mind until you free them! ...you've such a poetic little muse!) |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
10/12/2009 |
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| TRUE BEAUTY IS IN THE EYE OF THE BEHOLDER AND APPARENTLY, FOR SOME, SO IS TRUE WORTH...DUAL PURPOSES...EVEN UNDER THE SAME ROOF. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS |
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| Reviewed by Carole Mathys |
10/12/2009 |
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| ...a magnificent jewel to be enjoyed by all that read your words, splendid writing, Kate. |
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| Reviewed by Cryssa C |
10/12/2009 |
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Subtle metaphors and strong comparisons hidden among the lines of this beauty...
My favorite lines are the last two.
Your poem made me think about how often I overlook the gems in others and see only rough edges, and would want to throw them away in pursuit of other more seemingly favorable traits...yet for a lack of polish, it may be that those I would so readily pass by are those that hold the greatest treasure and would be my closest friends...
Your writing always makes me think...
Cryssa |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
10/12/2009 |
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| lovely writing-a nice comp[arison of roles lived in and how they are felt and percieved |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
10/12/2009 |
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| such elegant pearls of thought surround the essence of this illustrious poem ... smooth, silky and sagacious ... |
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| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
10/12/2009 |
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| WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
10/12/2009 |
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Dear sweet Kate, when I read this I read it with an open mind and an open heart which I do with all the gifts you so graciously offer us here on the den. I always light up when I see a posting by you for I know it will be something special and you did not dissappoint me with this one for sure. Pearls warms the heart, titiliates the soft senualities and using sublte metaphors exercises the brain. I can only agree with the other reviews sweet Kate...this is a masterpiece...
big hugs
pops |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
10/12/2009 |
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Kate, perhaps the most precious pearls necklace is the one made with tender kisses.
"Pearls" as a poem and a tribute deserves its own mother-of-pearl shell.
Georg
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
10/12/2009 |
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Kate, There is magic in your words, "pearls" is a gem of a poem. You must listen to Sade's song entitled "Pearls", it is the most beautiful heart tearing song I have ever heard. Donna Summer heard it in an airport and called Sade up immediately and asked her if she could cover it for her next concert. She sang it here in Connecticut, but I love Sade's version the best. It starts out like this: "There is a woman in Somalia, scraping for pearls on the roadside, there's a force stronger than nature, keeps her will alive..." It is an amazing song, let me know what you think of it. You can go on youtube and call it up and listen..
till later, my dear friend, peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
10/11/2009 |
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You stepped out of the den and into higher dimensions with this gem Kate! I believe you are ready to have your ame right up there with
Carol Ann Duffy etc! |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Wilson |
10/11/2009 |
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| Kate, although I love everything you write, I think that this is one of your very best! |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
10/11/2009 |
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Kate,
This is beyond lustre of pearl, this sparkles diamond and it enriches and warms and encourages all who enter its beauty.
John |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
10/11/2009 |
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Such a beautiful, beautiful poem ... well done, Kate.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Ted Bossis |
10/11/2009 |
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| Always <>raw & unfettered-unfrozen-undeniable-Kate-ovel-Ted |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton |
10/11/2009 |
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| What a poem. For some reason this reminds me of the series "Upstairs, Downstairs," and I would love to see it again. The servant girl and the master has been connected throughout the ages. There is, of course the servant boy and the mistress also. I thoroughly enjoyed this offering my English friend. |
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| Reviewed by George Ellison (Reader) |
10/11/2009 |
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| The two George's here are in agreement. Fine and polished work. |
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| Reviewed by Lori Moore |
10/11/2009 |
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| Pearls indeed. Excellent poetry, Kate. |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
10/11/2009 |
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Kate,
May we all tip our hats to you,,,this is my all time favorite, I am awed and you can not file this, it is too great, Maya Angelo is one of my favorite poets and I am telling you,,,go go go, like George says, exposure!
Love,Christine |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
10/11/2009 |
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You are definitely one of Great Britain's finest poets, Kate; well done!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D X0X0X0X0 |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
10/11/2009 |
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| England has always produced some of the finest poets, the King being Sheakspeare, but you being inspired by England's newest Laureate has added to your luster as one not too far behind her with your gifted poetry that just needs more exposure. Excellent write. |
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