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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
11/13/2009 |
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Very nice, Kate. This reminds me of Shakespeare's famous quote. Sometimes we lose ourselves loving others. Hugs,
Sheila |
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| Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis |
11/7/2009 |
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| The title is pure perfection particularly AFTER reading through the piece. Love it ~ |
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| Reviewed by Dallas D'Angelo-Gary |
10/29/2009 |
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| Concise and perfect, Kate. |
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| Reviewed by Jon Willey |
10/25/2009 |
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| knotted as is, the ends enter and exit at the same place -- you now stand where you stood before you started -- at the onset of a "true lover's knot" -- clever and very entertaining Kate -- an unusual twist, if you will -- peace and love my friend -- Jon Michael |
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| Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya |
10/25/2009 |
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| Kate..." Give me myself again that I may show you what you have made me"....profound write yet again from one of my best poet around....clap clap clap....In 9 short lines you have captured everything that needs to be captured...They say when it comes to poetry, less is more and no one exemplifies this truth times and again as you....My friend,It's time for you to come out with a brand new poetry book....This is my special request to you...let the whole world read you...treat them please....gem of a write my friend...you never cease to teach us...love nluck....BHUWAN!!! |
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| Reviewed by Paul Berube |
10/23/2009 |
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Hi Kate!
That's quite profound my friend but I would expect no less from you. That's definitely a good thing. Bless You Always, Paul. |
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| Reviewed by Gene Williamson |
10/22/2009 |
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| A knotty problem indeed, Kate. -gene. |
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| Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson |
10/21/2009 |
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yes...what true love pose ta do
beautiful |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
10/21/2009 |
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| all good things come full cycle as this gem of a poem Kate! |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
10/21/2009 |
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....forget me knot!...this poem is awesome...funny I was thinking on a line of a knot poem a few weeks ago...but it never transpired..this is great Kate!
:)Christine |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge |
10/21/2009 |
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| I needed to read it twice but it's very thought provoking Kate. |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
10/20/2009 |
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a true lover's knot is knowing how not to become untangled ;)
a superb tour de force in inter-reasoning reasoning ...
no wonder i couldn't access this poem at first ;) |
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| Reviewed by Rose Rideout |
10/20/2009 |
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A true loves knot which can never come untied Kate.
Newfie Hugs, Rose |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
10/20/2009 |
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Kate,
A Gordion that should never be cut or can't be.
John |
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| Reviewed by Patrick Granfors |
10/20/2009 |
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| Your knot is not a knot at all, rather sinous threads weaved to form the loving fabric of sharing yourself unconditionally. Patrick |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
10/20/2009 |
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THERE you are, Kate, wondered what happened to your poem! And it's a beauty - well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Lori Moore |
10/20/2009 |
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| Sounds like a healthy knot to me. Very nice. |
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| Reviewed by D Johnson |
10/20/2009 |
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The love keeps on giving and giving and giving. Well done!
Cheers,
Dan |
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| Reviewed by Steve Chering |
10/20/2009 |
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the twist within turns outwards. that's what i like to see.
You twist well. |
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| Reviewed by Cryssa C |
10/20/2009 |
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When reading your poem I am reminded of a song about the circle of friendship...how it goes on and on, infinitely, eternally...because it never ceases.
Your words are simple, yet convey such meaning in this lyrical, circular write.
Cryssa :~) |
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| Reviewed by Bill Broome |
10/20/2009 |
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Your poem says truth for those who love... or wish to love.
And,I'm glad that I know you!
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
10/20/2009 |
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One gives freely, One receives freely, That is the balance in a relationship. You give again and again and receive again and again. It's a wonderful circle of love. Nicely written. I tried to read this several times yesterday, but like you said it wouldn't let me in. I am so glad that I read this now! I want that circle in my life, I have so much love to give to a special man if only he would wake up and receive it. lol :)
Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Ps thank you for all your lovely comments on my poetry, you are such a beautiful person. |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
10/20/2009 |
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Simple complicity that says so much with so little. Kate you always find such uniguness in all you write. There is never mediocrity when it comes to your form, descriptives or thoughts. This one is no exception for when we give ourselves in love we do cede a part of our very soul to another hoping that the exchange will be a fair one.
Love it Kate,
hugs
fee |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
10/20/2009 |
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| this is so very beautiful in its surrender of self |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Wilson |
10/20/2009 |
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| Hi, Kate! I, too tried several times to read this, but was always redirected to the list of popular poetry...but now, here it is, and it was so worth the wait. This is so lovely...and says so much about love...true love. Not only are we made free to be ourselves, but somewhere in the process, we are made so much more...both from giving and taking. |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton |
10/20/2009 |
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I thought I was going nuts yesterday, Kate. I tried off and on all day to log onto this. Even tried to email you using AD's method, but couldn't even do that. Okay, now the poem.
This one sounds, at first, as a lot of doublespeak, but on the second read I "got" it. I'd love to sit down over a cup of java or whatever and have a lengthy discussion, you are a very interesting person. |
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| Reviewed by Ted Bossis |
10/20/2009 |
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| This is precious and more than a few words()You have given of yourself once more "()" evollove ~ Ted |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
10/20/2009 |
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Can't say I ever had you, then again, if I had you why the heck I would give you back? Girl, if you tried to confuse me...now again, can't say I ever...Oh boy!
Georg
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
10/20/2009 |
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| Being herself or what he made her it still says I love you. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
10/20/2009 |
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Tried to read this yesterday; couldn't get past the top 25 stories! ARRRGGH!!! Very annoying when it does that! Good poem, Kate; well done as always!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D |
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