Addicted Daze
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David Anthony
Saturday, March 13, 2004
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I walk in a daze since I met her.
Thoughts of her bombard my brain sending my emotions out of control.
Her eyes stay burned in my mind as I attempt to go through the day and I long to gaze once again into them, be lost in them, feel the warmth and happiness I see in them.
She acts as if she is not beautiful, but I notice nothing else around her as her beauty drowns out everything and everyone.
Her happiness is addicting and I don't want to leave her side as my addiction grows.
When she speaks she fascinates me. Others speak to me but jumbled words are all I hear, moving lips all I see.
Her hair is kept in a natural way, framing her face perfectly so that her infectious smile may seed my daze.
Who is this girl, this woman, this angel who has filled my heart and confused my world?
My daze begins to clear now, but only because I must work or drive or converse.
I know that it won't be long though before the daze thickens again and I can hardly wait to feel the drug of her inside me once more........
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| Reviewed by Carol Surber |
11/16/2008 |
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You describe love, as someone truly in love.
CarolHawks |
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| Reviewed by aaaa aaa (Reader) |
11/27/2007 |
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| This is the poem through which I discovered your beautiful writing |
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| Reviewed by Anne Brooks |
7/27/2005 |
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| wow..beautiful description of lust..I think..A woman's aura in this poem is like a drug ,a passage into another world:you see her ,you taste her and yet you don't loose sight of reality.nicely written.Anne Pawlak. |
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| Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga |
7/9/2004 |
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Dear David,
What passionate embracing poetry.
Love is truly like a drug !!
Warm hugs
Elga |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) |
3/16/2004 |
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| Gorgeous poetry, so passionate and vibrant. |
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| Reviewed by na na (Reader) |
3/15/2004 |
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| David, sounds like her beauty drowns out the Sun. She must know you love her from this wonderful poem. Bill Murray |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
3/13/2004 |
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| love is a powerful craving indeed! your poem resonates with this feeling of addiction quite well ... |
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| Reviewed by Lori Moore |
3/13/2004 |
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| Sounds intense to me. Great write. |
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