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| Reviewed by J'nia Fowler |
1/7/2009 |
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there's no place like home...... Enjoyed this poem very much. Been on a couple of air buses like this one.
cheers J'nia |
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| Reviewed by Carol Surber |
11/16/2008 |
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I will continue my flights...in my dreams. Never to board a plane again! Scared the beejeebies outta me! Your descriptive writings will keep me grounded.
CarolHawks |
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| Reviewed by David Delaney |
10/21/2008 |
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Truly wonderful writing David & obviously writen from expierence, I am not a keen flyer but its something one must do sometimes.
Dave. |
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| Reviewed by Rafika Anderson |
2/3/2008 |
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| Your poem reminded me of several nightmarish flights I've had in my life, as an intrepid flyer all over the world. You aptly capture the terror and discomfort that flying can bring. Your imagery is strong and rhythm is captivating. Nicely written work, David. Thanks for sharing. |
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| Reviewed by Rebecca Wiles |
11/8/2007 |
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Very nice touch and I felt each tremor too! ;)
Becca |
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| Reviewed by angelina neves |
7/25/2007 |
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| brrrrrrrrrr! I hate to fly and every time i have to abstract myself from the sense of being in a coffin with wings! :) Lovely! |
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| Reviewed by Aleja Bennett |
6/19/2006 |
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| VERY NICE GREAT WORD FLOW |
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| Reviewed by Chrissy McVay |
12/22/2005 |
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| I fly sometimes, but I'm not a confident flyer. Luckily, I've never been in an airplane under stormy conditions. BTW-I like your 'shadow photo'. Very mysterious... |
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| Reviewed by ~ Chanti |
6/23/2005 |
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Whew I'm glad you made it. Somehow I missed this poem. I know you're busy but it would be nice to read your work every now and again ;-)
Take care David
Chanti |
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| Reviewed by mz kimi |
6/21/2005 |
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| nice work |
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| Reviewed by Saundra Washington D.D. |
6/7/2005 |
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| Nicely convey; scary! |
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| Reviewed by Vesna TwinFlameunion |
3/16/2005 |
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I flew to Aussie two years ago..experienced very similar sensations...
you've conveyed the feeling really well...good on ya David!
Vesna:) |
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| Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson |
2/27/2005 |
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| Well done! I can relate! |
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| Reviewed by L. Figgins |
2/27/2005 |
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| Thanks for taking us on this ride in the cockpit, David. As a teenager I wanted to join the Civil Air Patrol and learn to fly, but my mother wouldn't allow it. Anyone who even has been a passenger aboard beachcraft can relate to this one. Glad to see that you landed safely! |
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| Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers |
2/27/2005 |
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This is exactly why I don't fly! Besides..I wasn't born with wings.
Your words sent cold chills up my spine. Frightening!
Lisa |
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| Reviewed by Sue Hess |
2/27/2005 |
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| i hate flying thru storms but take comfort that very few planes actually crash because of weather unless its ice, thunderstorms are scary though |
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